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-# burning wind from the plains ... wind far stronger
+# A wind far stronger than that
 
-Here a "burning wind" represents a fierce and merciless enemy. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+far stronger than the "burning wind" of verse 11. The wind is a metaphor for a fierce and merciless enemy. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
 # will come at my command