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 # a great voice from the throne saying
 
-The word "voice" refers to the one who speaks. Alternate translation: "someone speak loudly from the throne saying" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+"someone speak loudly from the throne saying"
 
 # Look!
 
 The word "Look" here alerts us to pay attention to the surprising information that follows.
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-# The dwelling place of God is with human beings, and he will live with them
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-These two phrases mean the same thing and emphasize that God will, indeed, live among men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-parallelism]])
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