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-# when they cut a bull ... walked ... walked between the parts of the bull
+# when they cut a bull ... walked between its parts
 
-This passage describes how the people established the covenant. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-background]])
+These words begin to describe how the people established the covenant. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-background]])
 
 # established before me