diff --git a/dan/06/04.md b/dan/06/04.md index f955728709..a96324f2d3 100644 --- a/dan/06/04.md +++ b/dan/06/04.md @@ -1,12 +1,8 @@ # Then the other chief administrators and the provincial governors ... for the kingdom -The other administrators were jealous of Daniel. This can be made explicit. Alternate translation: "Then the other chief administrators and the provincial governors became jealous. So they looked for mistakes in the work Daniel did for the kingdom" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) +"Then the other chief administrators and the provincial governors became jealous. So they looked for mistakes in the work Daniel did for the kingdom" # No mistakes or negligence was found in him -This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "They could find no mistakes or negligence in his work" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) - -# negligence - -overly looking your responsibilities +"They could find no mistakes or negligence in his work"