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-# pricking briars and painful thorns for the house of Israel from all those around them who despise their people
+# There will no longer be pricking briars and painful thorns for the house of Israel from all those around them who despise them
 
-Here the briars and thorns represent what would cause suffering and pain. Alternate translation: "people anywhere around the house of Israel who wound them like briars, hurt them like thorns, and despise them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+Here the briars and thorns represent what would cause suffering and pain. Alternate translation: "There will no longer be people anywhere around the house of Israel who wound them like briars, hurt them like thorns, and despise them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
 
 # the house of Israel
 
 The word "house" is a metonym for the family that lives in the house. In this case it refers to Israel's descendants. See how you translated this in [Ezekiel 3:1](../03/01.md). Alternate translation: "the Israelites" or "the Israelite people group" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
 
-# around them ... their people ... they will know
-The words "them," "their," and "they" refer to the people of Israel.
+# around them ... them ... they will know
+
+The words "them" and "they" refer to the people of Israel.