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 # In that day
 
-"At that time" or "When this happens." This phrase here refers to the time of peace and restoration that immediately follows the day of Yahweh.
+"At that time" or "When this happens". This refers to the time of peace and restoration that immediately follows the day of Yahweh.
 
 # say to Jerusalem ... Zion
 
-The names of these cities here refer to the people who live in them. Alternate translation: "say to the people of Jerusalem ... people of Zion" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+"say to the people of Jerusalem ... people of Zion"
 
 # Do not let your hands become weak
 
-Here the "hands" are a metonym for the whole person and being physically weak is a metaphor for being discouraged. Alternate translation: "Do not allow yourself become weak" or "Do not become discouraged and so stop working" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]])
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+"Do not allow yourself to become weak" or "Do not become discouraged and so stop working"
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