From 86bbe25437dc74eb7f2135aacb7233bd5ab2ec90 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: hmw3 <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Wed, 5 Dec 2018 13:57:05 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] From work on PDF 1CO 13-14

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 1co/14/09.md | 12 ++++++++++--
 1co/14/12.md |  8 ++++++--
 1co/14/30.md | 12 ++++++++++--
 3 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1co/14/09.md b/1co/14/09.md
index 9263d29bc0..72f1a38a07 100644
--- a/1co/14/09.md
+++ b/1co/14/09.md
@@ -1,3 +1,11 @@
-# General Information:
+# you with the tongue. If you utter speech
 
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+or "you. If with the tongue you utter speech"
+
+# with the tongue
+
+The word "tongue" here is a synecdoche for all the parts of the body using which a person speaks. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])
+
+# how will what is said be understood
+
+These passive clauses can be translated in active form. Alternate translation: "how will anyone understand what you have said" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
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diff --git a/1co/14/12.md b/1co/14/12.md
index 0c7aede784..a06922eb71 100644
--- a/1co/14/12.md
+++ b/1co/14/12.md
@@ -1,8 +1,12 @@
+# General Information:
+
+All instances of "you" and the imperatives are plural. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]])
+
 # for the manifestations of the Spirit
 
 "to do things that show that the Spirit controls you"
 
-# try to excel in the gifts that build up the church
+# seek for the edification of the church so that you might abound
 
-Paul speaks of the church as if it were a house that one could build and of the work of building the church as if it were something one could harvest. Alternate translation: "try to succeed greatly in making God's people more able to serve God" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+Some versions read, "seek that you might abound in those things that edify the church." Paul speaks of the church as if it were a house that one could build. Alternate translation: "try to succeed greatly in making God's people more able to serve God so that things will go well with you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
diff --git a/1co/14/30.md b/1co/14/30.md
index 38450b0ade..cef3920fbf 100644
--- a/1co/14/30.md
+++ b/1co/14/30.md
@@ -1,4 +1,12 @@
-# if an insight is given to one
+# there is a revelation
 
-This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "if God gives someone insight to someone" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
+"God reveals something" or "God speaks"
+
+# to one who is sitting
+
+"to one of the people sitting there listening to the prophets"
+
+# the first
+
+the person who has been speaking