From 63efab3b7d800f0663c035201bc31b9e0dcf588d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Obiwon Date: Mon, 11 Sep 2023 23:46:52 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Update 'rev/09/06.md' --- rev/09/06.md | 8 ++------ 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/rev/09/06.md b/rev/09/06.md index 4733d7b177..118b0c008a 100644 --- a/rev/09/06.md +++ b/rev/09/06.md @@ -1,12 +1,8 @@ # people will seek death but will not find it -This can be restated to remove the abstract noun "death." Alternate translation: "people will try to find a way to die but will not find it" or "people will try to kill themselves but will not find a way to die" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns]]) - -# will greatly desire to die - -"will want very much to die" or "will wish that they could die" +"people will try to find a way to die but will not find it" or "people will try to kill themselves but will not find a way to die" # death will flee from them -John speaks of death as if it were a person or animal that could run away. Alternate translation: "they will not be able to die" or "they will not die" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-personification]]) +"they will not be able to die" or "they will not die"