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-# snares are all around you ... There is darkness ... an abundance of waters covers you
+# snares are all around you ... sudden fear troubles you
 
-Each of these metaphors means troubles and dangers are all around Job because of his sin. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+These are metaphors for trouble and danger. Alternate translation: "you are always in danger ... you become afraid for no reason" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])