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-# Connecting Statement:
-
-This is the end of the conversation about entering the kingdom of heaven.
-
 # who will not receive
 
-This could be stated in positive form. First the words "there is not one who" in the previous verse (verse 29) need to be changed to "everyone who" and then these words here need to be changed to "will receive." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-doublenegatives]])
+This could be stated in positively. First the words "there is not one who" in the previous verse (verse 29)  would be changed to "everyone who" and then these words would be changed to "will receive." 
 
 # in this time
 
 "in this present world"
 
-# in the age to come, eternal life
-
-"he will also receive eternal life in the age to come"
+# and in the age to come, eternal life
 
+"and in the age to come, he will receive eternal life" or "and in the future world, he will receive eternal life"