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 # to David
 
-Some versions add "when he was at Hebron" and others do not. You may want to add the phrase if it is present in your national version. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-textvariants]])
+Some versions have "to Daved when he was at Hebron." You may want to include "when he was at Hebron" it is present in your national version. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-textvariants]])
 
 # Whose land is this?
 
-The original text of this question is not clear. Possible meanings are 1) Abner had the power to give the land to David. Alternate translation: "This land is mine!" or 2) David is chosen by God to rule the land: Alternate translation: "This land rightfully belongs to you!" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]])
+The original meaning of this question is not clear. Possible meanings are 1) Abner had the power to give the land to David. Alternate translation: "This land is mine!" or 2) David is chosen by God to rule the land: Alternate translation: "This land rightfully belongs to you!" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]])
 
 # my hand is with you