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 # There was a loud outcry in Egypt
 
-This can be stated with a verbal form. Alternate translation: "All the Egyptians cried loudly" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns]])
+"All the Egyptians cried loudly" 
 
 # loud outcry
 
-Here the "outcry" is of pain and grief over the death of the children. See how you translated "outcry" in [Exodus 3:7](../03/07.md). 
+Here the "outcry" is of pain and grief over the death of the children. See Exodus 3:7. 
 
 # for there was not a house where there was not someone dead
 
-This double negative emphasizes the positive. Alternate translation: "because someone was dead in every house" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-doublenegatives]])
-
+"because someone was dead in every house"