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 Possible meanings are 1) "to allow me to know his Son" or 2) "to show the world through me that Jesus is God's Son."
 
-# Son
+# his Son
 
-This is an important title for Jesus, the Son of God. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/guidelines-sonofgodprinciples]])
+This is an important title for Jesus, the Son of God. 
 
-# preach him
+# so that I might preach him
 
-"proclaim that he is God's Son" or "preach the good news about God's Son"
+"so that I might preach about him" or "so that I might proclaim the good news about God's Son"
 
-# consult with flesh and blood
+# I did not immediately consult with flesh and blood
 
-This is an expression that means talking with other people. Alternate translation: "ask people to help me understand the message" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]])
+"I did not immediately ask people to help me understand the message"