diff --git a/2pe/02/04.md b/2pe/02/04.md
index d9a4ffd3d3..1e3ea09eef 100644
--- a/2pe/02/04.md
+++ b/2pe/02/04.md
@@ -1,22 +1,22 @@
 # Connecting Statement:
 
-Peter gives examples of those who acted against God and whom God punished because of what they did.
+In verses 4-9, Peter gives three examples of times that God punished sinners. Two of these times there were also some righteous people whom God did not punish.
 
 # did not spare
 
 "did not refrain from punishing" or "punished"
 
-# he committed them to Tartarus
+# but delivered them into hell
 
-The word "Tartarus" is a term from Greek religion that refers to the place where evil spirits and wicked men who have died are punished. Alternate translation: "he cast them into hell" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-names]])
+This tells how God punished the angels who sinned. Alternate translation: "but threw them down into hell" or "but sent them to hell"
 
-# to be kept in chains of lower darkness
+# to be kept in chains of darkness
 
-This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "where he will keep them in chains of lower darkness" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]])
+This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "where he keeps them in chains of darkness" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]])
 
-# in chains of lower darkness
+# in chains of darkness
 
-Possible meanings are 1) "in chains in a very dark place" or 2) "in very deep darkness that imprisons them like chains." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+Possible meanings are 1) "in chains in a very dark place" or 2) "in darkness that imprisons them like chains." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
 
 # until the judgment