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@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@ Here Nehemiah uses the word "now" to signal a new part of the story.
 
 # Sanballat
 
-This is a man's name. See how you translated this in [Nehemiah 2:10](../02/10.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-names]])
+This is a man's name. See how you translated it in [Nehemiah 2:10](../02/10.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-names]])
 
-# it burned within him, and he was furiously angry
+# anger burned within him, and he was furiously angry
 
-Here "it" refers to Sanballat's realization that the Jews are rebuilding the walls. This speaks of Sanballat becoming very angry as if his anger were a burning fire. Alternate translation: "he became furiously angry" or "he became very angry" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+This speaks of Sanballat becoming very angry as if his anger were a burning fire. These two phrases mean the same thing and are used together to emphasize that he was extremely angry.  Alternate translation: "he became furiously angry" or "he became very angry" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-doublet]])