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 This metaphor compares the Cretans to dangerous wild animals. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
 
-# so correct them severely
+# Therefore, correct them severely
 
-"therefore tell them strongly that they are wrong"
+"You must use strong language that the Cretans will understand when you correct them"
 
 # so that they may be sound in the faith