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@@ -10,15 +10,11 @@ This is the last of the seven angels. See how you translated "seventh" in [Revel
 
 The phrase "loud voices" represents speakers who spoke loudly. Alternate translation: "speakers in heaven spoke loudly and said"
 
-# The kingdom of the world ... the kingdom of our Lord and of his Christ
+# The kingdom of the world has become the kingdom of our Lord and of his Christ
 
-Here "kingdom" refers to the authority to rule the world. Alternate translation: "The authority to rule the world ... the authority that belongs to our Lord and his Christ" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+Here "kingdom" refers to the authority to rule the world. Alternate translation: "The authority to rule the world now belongs to our Lord and his Christ" or "Our Lord and his Christ are now the rulers of the world" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
 # the world
 
 This refers to everyone in the world. Alternate translation: "everyone in the world" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
-# The kingdom of the world has become the kingdom of our Lord and of his Christ
-
-"Our Lord and his Christ are now the rulers of the world"
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