From 0d8c5bb1affa8eb2b4f37b135c381d58cc0aff67 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SusanQuigley Date: Tue, 1 Oct 2024 14:09:48 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Update lam/05/13.md --- lam/05/13.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/lam/05/13.md b/lam/05/13.md index abdc3b6c00..9b8fa12941 100644 --- a/lam/05/13.md +++ b/lam/05/13.md @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ # Young men are forced -This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "They force young men" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) +"They force young men" # boys stagger under heavy loads of wood -The boys are forced to carry the loads of wood. Alternate translation: "boys stagger because they are forced to carry heavy loads of wood" or "they force the boys to carry heavy loads of wood which make them stagger" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) +"boys walk unsteadily as they carry heavy loads of wood" or "they force boys to carry heavy loads of wood that make them stagger"