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 # You have made your latest kindness better than the first
 
-"You have shown me even more kindness now than you did before"
+"You have shown even more kindness now than you did before"
 
 # your latest kindness
 
-This refers to Ruth asking Boaz to marry her. By marrying Naomi's relative, Ruth would provide for Naomi and demonstrate great kindness to Naomi.
+Ruth showed kindness to Naomi. Ruth would provide for Naomi by marrying Naomi's relative, Boaz.
 
-# because you have not gone after
+# you have not gone after any of the young men
 
-"you have not pursued marriage with." Ruth could have ignored Naomi's need and looked for a husband for herself outside of Naomi's relatives. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]])
+"you have not tried to marry any of the young men"