From d5daf2e4f1d01ea2f36727c6b4b66a7286ad9ebc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 20:43:14 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 01/78] Fixed syntax. --- eph/01/20.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/eph/01/20.md b/eph/01/20.md index 02f892b977..9a47516a98 100644 --- a/eph/01/20.md +++ b/eph/01/20.md @@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ From among all those who have died. This expression describes all dead people together in the underworld. To come back from among them speaks of becoming alive again. -# seated him at his right hand - +# seated him at his right hand in the heavenly places +The person who sits "at the right hand" of a king sits at his right side and rules with all the authority of the king at whose right hand or side he sits. This is a metonym of location that represents the authority that the person in that location possesses. Alternate translation: "gave him all authority to rule from heaven" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) # in the heavenly places From 4fe3b03d7ee9dc5654eaeee9fe0f40073dc7c72f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 20:45:10 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 02/78] Delete 'job/06/22.md' --- job/06/22.md | 4 ---- 1 file changed, 4 deletions(-) delete mode 100644 job/06/22.md diff --git a/job/06/22.md b/job/06/22.md deleted file mode 100644 index 6f84ae90fa..0000000000 --- a/job/06/22.md +++ /dev/null @@ -1,4 +0,0 @@ -# Did I say to you, 'Give something to me?' Or, 'Offer me a gift from your wealth?' Or, 'Save me from my adversary's hand?' Or, 'Ransom me from the hand of my oppressors?' - -Job uses rhetorical questions to emphasize that he did not ask his friends to give him anything or to help him. Alternate translation: "I did ask you to give me money or a gift. Nor did I ask you to save me from my adversary or oppressors." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) - From 1bcaa2b712c90b6764c10263a8bd113c80b738a1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 20:51:58 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 03/78] Fixed bad notes. --- job/06/23.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/06/23.md b/job/06/23.md index 95c2a39d9a..b61502d377 100644 --- a/job/06/23.md +++ b/job/06/23.md @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@ -# Did I say to you, 'Give something to me?' Or, 'Offer me a gift from your wealth?' Or, 'Save me from my adversary's hand?' Or, 'Ransom me from the hand of my oppressors?' +# or, 'Save me from my adversary's hand' or, 'Ransom me from the hand of my oppressors'? -Job uses rhetorical questions to emphasize that he did not ask his friends to give him anything or to help him. Alternate translation: "I did ask you to give me money or a gift. Nor did I ask you to save me from my adversary or oppressors." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) +These words are the last of a series of rhetorical questions that begins in verse 22. Job uses these questions to emphasize that he has not asked his friends to give him anything or to help him. "I never said to you, 'Give ... me' or, 'Offer ... wealth' or, 'Save ... hand' or, 'Ransom ... oppressors'." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) -# Save me from my adversary's hand ... Ransom me from the hand of my oppressors +# my adversary's hand ... the hand of my oppressors -Both of these statements mean the same thing. Also, here "hand" represents power or control. Alternate translation: "Save me from my adversary or my oppressors" or "Save me from my adversary" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) +The word "hand" represents power or control. Alternate translation: "having my adversary control me ... having my oppressors control me" or "my adversary's power ... my oppressors' power" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) # Ransom me From 9a8f66a88894aa9b502d52ac0ecc0e2a240832fc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 20:52:58 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 04/78] Added missing note. --- mat/05/39.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/mat/05/39.md b/mat/05/39.md index 08f225f0e0..13c45d03db 100644 --- a/mat/05/39.md +++ b/mat/05/39.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # But I say - +Jesus agrees with God and his word, but he does not agree with the way the religious leaders have applied God's word. The "I" is emphatic. This indicates that what Jesus says is equally important to the original commands from God. Try to translate this phrase in a way that shows that emphasis. # one who is evil From d69e6f9a9102f726a160f669920d7bbaed48720e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 20:53:21 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 05/78] Fixed syntax. --- isa/53/01.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/isa/53/01.md b/isa/53/01.md index 54758776d5..d04521ae59 100644 --- a/isa/53/01.md +++ b/isa/53/01.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Here Isaiah describes events that will happen in the future as if they happened in the past. This emphasizes that they certainly will happen. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-pastforfuture]]) -Isaiah continues describing Yahweh's servant. +Isaiah continues describing Yahweh's servant. Here Isaiah describes events that will happen in the future as if they happened in the past. This emphasizes that they certainly will happen. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-pastforfuture]]) # Who has believed what they heard from us From 797a4ae56b3326b31ec6cbe16d22ce7829100b5e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 20:55:08 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 06/78] Fixed syntax. --- psa/072/001.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/psa/072/001.md b/psa/072/001.md index 1e2e88b0d3..7f770171d1 100644 --- a/psa/072/001.md +++ b/psa/072/001.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) -Possible meanings for the header "a psalm of Solomon" are 1) David wrote this psalm about Solomon ("the king's son") or 2) Solomon (who, as David's son, was "the king's son") wrote this psalm as a prayer about himself or 3) another king wrote it about his son in the style of Solomon. People in those days would often speak of themselves as if they were someone else. However, it would be best to translate this as though the psalmist is speaking of someone else, not of himself. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-123person]]) +Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. Possible meanings for the header "a psalm of Solomon" are 1) David wrote this psalm about Solomon ("the king's son") or 2) Solomon (who, as David's son, was "the king's son") wrote this psalm as a prayer about himself or 3) another king wrote it about his son in the style of Solomon. People in those days would often speak of themselves as if they were someone else. However, it would be best to translate this as though the psalmist is speaking of someone else, not of himself. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-123person]]) # Give the king your righteous decrees, God, your righteousness to the king's son From 8e55ae92a1af8ee3365e5bf19d26819b739ecba1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 20:55:18 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 07/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/16/32.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/16/32.md b/act/16/32.md index 2f7a4cd123..a5ebf5da5f 100644 --- a/act/16/32.md +++ b/act/16/32.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Here the first use of the word "they" as well as the words "their" and "them" refer to Paul and Silas. Compare [Acts 16:25](../16/25.md). The last use of the word "they" refers to the people in the jailers' household. -The words "him," "his," and "he" refer to the jailer. +Here the first use of the word "they" as well as the words "their" and "them" refer to Paul and Silas. Compare [Acts 16:25](../16/25.md). The last use of the word "they" refers to the people in the jailers' household. The words "him," "his," and "he" refer to the jailer. # They spoke the word of the Lord to him From 6b2cf30967de948512e11c73fda0728ecb135edb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 20:56:15 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 08/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/12/16.md | 1 - 1 file changed, 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/act/12/16.md b/act/12/16.md index 25daebefd2..3c59c7a931 100644 --- a/act/12/16.md +++ b/act/12/16.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: Here the words "they" and "them" refer to the people in the house. The words "He" and "he" refer to Peter. -Though Herod had killed James in [Acts 12:2](../12/02.md), there was more than one James. # But Peter continued knocking From b43dcb6ba08728f0ecf03f87b02beed3d6b9b634 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 20:56:35 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 09/78] Fixed syntax. --- ezk/34/25.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/ezk/34/25.md b/ezk/34/25.md index 5e1f327daa..4bc89db5a4 100644 --- a/ezk/34/25.md +++ b/ezk/34/25.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Yahweh continues giving Ezekiel his message to the people of Israel. -Yahweh continues speaking of the people of Israel as if they were a flock of sheep. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +Yahweh continues giving Ezekiel his message to the people of Israel. Yahweh continues speaking of the people of Israel as if they were a flock of sheep. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # a covenant of peace From b4f02d0c539e20e3f506fd4a959f7bf5cc7e248d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 20:57:11 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 10/78] Fixed syntax. --- job/38/19.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/38/19.md b/job/38/19.md index ef202114a4..4bcecc0fb9 100644 --- a/job/38/19.md +++ b/job/38/19.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Yahweh uses three questions to emphasize that he understands light and darkness and Job does not. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) -Each of these verses have two parallel phrases. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) +Yahweh uses three questions to emphasize that he understands light and darkness and Job does not. Each of these verses have two parallel phrases. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) # Connecting Statement: From 7d9286217ee2beab7273ae7d6666d1d663760947 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 20:57:29 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 11/78] Fixed syntax. --- psa/064/001.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/psa/064/001.md b/psa/064/001.md index 29d16e0344..764edf3c89 100644 --- a/psa/064/001.md +++ b/psa/064/001.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) -This psalm is a prayer for help. +This psalm is a prayer for help. Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) # For the chief musician From fd04e7784059431b64023de14128e070cb284e53 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:01:37 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 12/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/13/11.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/13/11.md b/act/13/11.md index 8b1fc2bcf0..576d619875 100644 --- a/act/13/11.md +++ b/act/13/11.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -The words "you" and "him" refer to Elymas, the magician. -The word "he" refers to the Sergius Paulus, proconsul (governor of Paphos). +The words "you" and "him" refer to Elymas the magician. The word "he" refers to the Sergius Paulus, proconsul (governor of Paphos). # Connecting Statement: From 5b4864ca989a5b618769b7e2a8b89382ddbff30b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:03:52 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 13/78] Update 'neh/09/17.md' --- neh/09/17.md | 4 +++- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/neh/09/17.md b/neh/09/17.md index fe930cb065..3a82ee5981 100644 --- a/neh/09/17.md +++ b/neh/09/17.md @@ -1,4 +1,6 @@ -# were stiff-necked pizza +# Pending ULB issue #1581 + +# were stiff-necked This is an idiom that means that they were stubborn. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]]) From 453d79bacf21459a47aa7930c010e3d473e4deb9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:04:08 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 14/78] Fixed syntax. --- deu/24/03.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/deu/24/03.md b/deu/24/03.md index 4cb2d86bb0..125de6eea7 100644 --- a/deu/24/03.md +++ b/deu/24/03.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Moses continues speaking to the people of Israel about a woman who gets a divorce and marries another man. -Moses speaks to the Israelites as if they were one man, so the words "you" and "your" here are singular. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) +Moses continues speaking to the people of Israel about a woman who gets a divorce and marries another man. Moses speaks to the Israelites as if they were one man, so the words "you" and "your" here are singular. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) # If the second husband hates her From 21c4f837595cf9d088789191fcbf782f469f68de Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:04:31 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 15/78] Delete 'lev/04/01.md' --- lev/04/01.md | 1 - 1 file changed, 1 deletion(-) delete mode 100644 lev/04/01.md diff --git a/lev/04/01.md b/lev/04/01.md deleted file mode 100644 index f9fcfb8ad8..0000000000 --- a/lev/04/01.md +++ /dev/null @@ -1 +0,0 @@ -# This note needs to be deleted. \ No newline at end of file From e16f21dd02db61b2668f224b74460a5a47a60d2c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:04:45 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 16/78] Fixed syntax. --- phm/01/01.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/phm/01/01.md b/phm/01/01.md index 449ec95bb9..15ade57803 100644 --- a/phm/01/01.md +++ b/phm/01/01.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Three times Paul identifies himself as the author of this letter. Evidently Timothy was with him and probably wrote the words down as Paul said them. Paul greets others who meet for church at Philemon's house. -All instances of "I," "me," and "my" refer to Paul. Philemon is the main person to whom this letter is written. All instances of "you" and "your" refer to him and are singular unless otherwise noted. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) +Three times Paul identifies himself as the author of this letter. Evidently Timothy was with him and probably wrote the words down as Paul said them. Paul greets others who meet for church at Philemon's house. All instances of "I," "me," and "my" refer to Paul. Philemon is the main person to whom this letter is written. All instances of "you" and "your" refer to him and are singular unless otherwise noted. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) # Paul, a prisoner of Christ Jesus, and the brother Timothy to Philemon From f422f0ca9c8a1ccf959e5d4ad7425fac43fa0611 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:05:03 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 17/78] Fixed syntax. --- php/01/01.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/php/01/01.md b/php/01/01.md index e9ad943732..d7602eb0b9 100644 --- a/php/01/01.md +++ b/php/01/01.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Paul and Timothy wrote this letter to the church at Philippi. -Because Paul writes later in the letter saying "I," it is generally assumed that he is the author and that Timothy, who is with him, writes as Paul speaks. All instances of "you" and "your" in the letter refer to the believers in the Philippian church and are plural. The word "our" probably refers to all believers in Christ, including Paul, Timothy, and the Philippian believers. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]]) +Paul and Timothy wrote this letter to the church at Philippi. Because Paul writes later in the letter saying "I," it is generally assumed that he is the author and that Timothy, who is with him, writes as Paul speaks. All instances of "you" and "your" in the letter refer to the believers in the Philippian church and are plural. The word "our" probably refers to all believers in Christ, including Paul, Timothy, and the Philippian believers. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]]) # Paul and Timothy ... and deacons From 9a7a682f70123ad4150adcca0b6c76d54fb71527 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:05:47 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 18/78] Update 'rev/03/22.md' --- rev/03/22.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/rev/03/22.md b/rev/03/22.md index fbdd84ae50..8384d4cc68 100644 --- a/rev/03/22.md +++ b/rev/03/22.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Let the one who has an ear, listen to +# Let the one who has an ear listen to Jesus is emphasizing that what he has just said is important and may take some effort to understand and put into practice. The phrase "has an ear" here is a metonym for the willingness to understand and obey. See how you translated this phrase in [Revelation 2:7](../02/07.md). Alternate translation: "Let the one who is willing to listen, listen to" or "The one who is willing to understand, let him understand and obey" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) From 33acef4fd32feb33bf1311739c3a33ebd62cf928 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:08:54 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 19/78] Fixed syntax. --- eph/02/09.md | 5 ++--- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/eph/02/09.md b/eph/02/09.md index 51d3f417b1..8ab5229d68 100644 --- a/eph/02/09.md +++ b/eph/02/09.md @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@ -# pending issue -# not from works and so no one may boast +# not from works, so that no one may boast -You may want to start a new sentence here. "Salvation does not come from works and so no one may boast" or "God does not save a person because of what that person does, so no one can boast and say that he earned his salvation" +You may want to start a new sentence here. "Salvation does not come from works, so that no one may boast" or "God does not save a person because of what that person does, so no one can boast and say that he earned his salvation" From 3e95110a03fdd4b2615f2b6e9bb8094f124c1bfb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:14:55 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 20/78] Added missing note. --- 2sa/22/16.md | 8 ++++++-- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/2sa/22/16.md b/2sa/22/16.md index c6a6b77047..b8005d9a8f 100644 --- a/2sa/22/16.md +++ b/2sa/22/16.md @@ -8,9 +8,13 @@ When Yahweh shouted in his attack against David's enemies, it is compared to his # the channels of the sea were seen +This can be translated in active form. Alternate translation: "People could see the channels of the sea" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) +# the channels of the sea -# the foundations ... were laid bare +the deepest part of the sea, from which the Hebrews believed was where the water in the sea came -David compares Yahweh's anger to turbulent movements of the ground. "This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Yahweh's battle cry exposed the foundations of the world" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) +# the foundations of the world were laid bare at the rebuke of Yahweh, at the blast of the breath of his nostrils + +David compares Yahweh's anger to turbulent movements of the ground. "This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Yahweh's rebuke, the breath of his nostrils, laid bare the foundations of the world" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) From 65b7e0365d220ae14e9601148c6fb85f985f55f0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:16:11 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 21/78] Fixed syntax. --- heb/01/03.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/heb/01/03.md b/heb/01/03.md index fb5b9f6f60..bbe5f1678f 100644 --- a/heb/01/03.md +++ b/heb/01/03.md @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ The author speaks of forgiving sins as if it were making a person clean. Alterna # he sat down at the right hand of the Majesty on high - +The person who sits "at the right hand" of a king sits at his right side and rules with all the authority of the king at whose right hand or side he sits. This is a metonym of location that represents the authority that the person in that location possesses. Alternate translation: "he began to rule with all the authority of the Majesty on high" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) # the Majesty on high From 0f38d00841bef086597d5cde781530c85bf0faed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:19:28 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 22/78] Fixed syntax. --- psa/075/001.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/psa/075/001.md b/psa/075/001.md index ff04594b0d..d5d9770e4c 100644 --- a/psa/075/001.md +++ b/psa/075/001.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) -The people of God are speaking in 75:1, and God speaks in 75:2-3. +The people of God are speaking in 75:1, and God speaks in 75:2-3. Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) # For the chief musician From e120a3f5984f0c1eacd1ff8c83a2aff07f3e501b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:29:16 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 23/78] Added missing note. --- 2pe/02/20.md | 6 +++++- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/2pe/02/20.md b/2pe/02/20.md index c511dc00b3..4c8bd007b4 100644 --- a/2pe/02/20.md +++ b/2pe/02/20.md @@ -1,6 +1,10 @@ -# If they have escaped +# Connecting Statement: +The words "they" and "them" refer to the false teachers Peter speaks of in verses 12-19. +# If they have escaped ... and are again entangled ... and overcome, the last state has become worse ... than the first + +This sentence is a description of a conditional statement that is true. The false teachers had at one time "escaped," but if they are again entangled ... and overcome," then "the last state has become worse ... than the first." # the corruption of the world From 55d6ac666e52e39068a9b194de3cd0b830a7d10d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:30:06 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 24/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/11/22.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/11/22.md b/act/11/22.md index 85f1c84d85..6a68ecd0e9 100644 --- a/act/11/22.md +++ b/act/11/22.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -In these verses, the word "he" refers to Barnabas. The word "they" refers to the believers of the church at Jerusalem. -The words "them" and "their" refer to the new believers. (See: [Acts 11:20](../11/20.md)) +In these verses, the word "he" refers to Barnabas. The word "they" refers to the believers of the church at Jerusalem. The words "them" and "their" refer to the new believers. (See: [Acts 11:20](../11/20.md)) # ears of the church From 5dd388729c502aa68cfa318aaa97d93aca54427c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:30:35 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 25/78] Delete 'lev/06/08.md' --- lev/06/08.md | 1 - 1 file changed, 1 deletion(-) delete mode 100644 lev/06/08.md diff --git a/lev/06/08.md b/lev/06/08.md deleted file mode 100644 index f9fcfb8ad8..0000000000 --- a/lev/06/08.md +++ /dev/null @@ -1 +0,0 @@ -# This note needs to be deleted. \ No newline at end of file From 46de3d4e1377904210e1ec0cde90613df43711ae Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:33:28 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 26/78] Added missing note. --- jer/33/19.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jer/33/19.md b/jer/33/19.md index e406889751..b709751ce1 100644 --- a/jer/33/19.md +++ b/jer/33/19.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # The word of Yahweh came to Jeremiah, saying, - +This idiom is used to introduce a special message from God. See how you translated a similar phrase in [Jeremiah 1:4](../01/04.md). Alternate translation: "Yahweh gave a message to Jeremiah. He said," or "Yahweh spoke this message to Jeremiah:" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]]) # to Jeremiah From 4e21e2dd03cf5ca91aeedc057cc9ec6fd6023371 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:34:37 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 27/78] Update '2ch/22/11.md' --- 2ch/22/11.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/2ch/22/11.md b/2ch/22/11.md index 99f4db2630..25ed205220 100644 --- a/2ch/22/11.md +++ b/2ch/22/11.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Jehosheba, a daughter of the king, ... a daughter of King Jehoram +# Jehosheba, a daughter of the king ... a daughter of King Jehoram Here "the king" refers to Jehoram, the father of Ahaziah. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From a703d453006b1c9e2a1a013894727c7aee1d4b1f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:34:56 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 28/78] Fixed syntax. --- psa/062/001.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/psa/062/001.md b/psa/062/001.md index 53fcb6c59a..8afca9b044 100644 --- a/psa/062/001.md +++ b/psa/062/001.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) -This psalm is a song about God's faithfulness. +This psalm is a song about God's faithfulness. Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) # For the chief musician From e38b27da7c47808bd3e6e296992071f100041a07 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:35:22 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 29/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/13/26.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/13/26.md b/act/13/26.md index 9545ea626d..71dad84a42 100644 --- a/act/13/26.md +++ b/act/13/26.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Here the word "us" includes Paul and his entire audience in the synagogue. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]]) -The word "they" and "their" refers to the Jews who lived in Jerusalem. +The word "they" and "their" refers to the Jews who lived in Jerusalem. Here the word "us" includes Paul and his entire audience in the synagogue. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]]) # Brothers, children of the line of Abraham ... who worship God From c2cd4d90e03103b8c85c35639dbbf435fb206c15 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:36:10 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 30/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/13/40.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/13/40.md b/act/13/40.md index c202a8631c..feabbe1d1c 100644 --- a/act/13/40.md +++ b/act/13/40.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -In his message to the people in the synagogue, Paul quotes the prophet Habakkuk. -Here the word "I" refers to God. +In his message to the people in the synagogue, Paul quotes the prophet Habakkuk. Here the word "I" refers to God. # Connecting Statement: From bc840254332de852eff4516377a565dfd7fd1b31 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:37:02 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 31/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/09/10.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/09/10.md b/act/09/10.md index 58a4e5a85f..53b7ed0c1c 100644 --- a/act/09/10.md +++ b/act/09/10.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -The story of Saul continues but Luke introduces another man named Ananias. This is not the same Ananias who died earlier in Acts [Acts 5:3](../05/03.md). You may translate it the same way though as you did in [Acts 5:1](../05/01.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) -Though there is more than one Judas mentioned in the New Testament, it is likely this is the only appearance of this Judas. +The story of Saul continues but Luke introduces another man named Ananias. This is not the same Ananias who died earlier in Acts [Acts 5:3](../05/03.md). You may translate this name the same way though as you did in [Acts 5:1](../05/01.md). Though there is more than one Judas mentioned in the New Testament, it is likely this is the only appearance of this Judas. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) # Now there was From a340b815818926eb44b888666662afc280c33f77 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:37:18 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 32/78] Fixed syntax. --- mat/19/01.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/mat/19/01.md b/mat/19/01.md index 4553d1143a..02efe84615 100644 --- a/mat/19/01.md +++ b/mat/19/01.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -This is the beginning of a new part of the story that runs through [Matthew 22:46](../22/46.md), which tells of Jesus ministering in Judea. -These verses provide background information of how Jesus came to be in Judea. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-background]]) +This is the beginning of a new part of the story that runs through [Matthew 22:46](../22/46.md), which tells of Jesus ministering in Judea. These verses provide background information of how Jesus came to be in Judea. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-background]]) # It came about that when From 5600746d625eda070b9f1ad03c2c1439a3f07599 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:38:05 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 33/78] Fixed syntax. --- gen/36/28.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/gen/36/28.md b/gen/36/28.md index 74fbeac687..00712bc528 100644 --- a/gen/36/28.md +++ b/gen/36/28.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ # Dishan ... Uz and Aran -These are names of men. See how you translated "Dishan" in [Genesis 36:21](./20.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) +These are names of men. See how you translated "Dishan" in [Genesis 36:21](./21.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From b503fa453409c2705d282dc1f10012b2e6142304 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:38:47 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 34/78] Fixed syntax. --- 1ch/01/01.md | 2 -- 1 file changed, 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/1ch/01/01.md b/1ch/01/01.md index 56782dcd84..f369efadec 100644 --- a/1ch/01/01.md +++ b/1ch/01/01.md @@ -1,5 +1,3 @@ # Adam ... Seth ... Enosh These are all names of men. Each man was the father or ancestor of the next man in the list. If your language has a specific way to mark this kind of list, you can use it here. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) - - \ No newline at end of file From 8da8c90efb7852bbb3eefcadc6b26b09fe1427d6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:39:42 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 35/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/10/27.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/10/27.md b/act/10/27.md index 0b9c37e8e5..307c9ae7f7 100644 --- a/act/10/27.md +++ b/act/10/27.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -The word "him" here refers to Cornelius. -Here the words "You" and "you" are plural and include Cornelius as well as the Gentiles who were present. +The word "him" here refers to Cornelius. Here the words "You" and "you" are plural and include Cornelius as well as the Gentiles who were present. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) # Connecting Statement: From 1cc7f31297e4fb1c5c680a85f5663149bf634fba Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:40:13 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 36/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/13/01.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/13/01.md b/act/13/01.md index 6996a2833a..1bbbdd1812 100644 --- a/act/13/01.md +++ b/act/13/01.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Verse 1 gives background information about the people in the church at Antioch. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-background]]) -Here the first word "they" probably refers to these five leaders but may also include the other believers. The next words "they" and "their" probably refer to the other three leaders not including Barnabas and Saul but could include other believers. +Verse 1 gives background information about the people in the church at Antioch. Here the first word "they" probably refers to these five leaders but may also include the other believers. The next words "they" and "their" probably refer to the other three leaders not including Barnabas and Saul but could include other believers. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-background]]) # Connecting Statement: From 55d7b7295b490a6599acb9456c9681c7bd05cef8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:40:27 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 37/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/04/23.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/04/23.md b/act/04/23.md index a2cf62d81e..3e0526d9e9 100644 --- a/act/04/23.md +++ b/act/04/23.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Speaking together, the people quote a Psalm of David from the Old Testament. -Here the word "they" refers to the rest of the believers, but not to Peter and John. +Speaking together, the people quote a Psalm of David from the Old Testament. Here the word "they" refers to the rest of the believers, but not to Peter and John. # came to their own people From 6ce4fcdc56e4fe864e3e2fdced298248592e639b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:41:01 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 38/78] Fixed syntax. --- psa/150/001.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/psa/150/001.md b/psa/150/001.md index f428670faa..651bb52b73 100644 --- a/psa/150/001.md +++ b/psa/150/001.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) -This focuses on praise or worship is most commonly held in the temple. +This focuses on praise or worship that is most commonly held in the temple. Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) # Praise God in his holy place From 39b7aeec4b58f0b3f6b8dc305f756e18afcc0d7f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:42:44 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 39/78] Deleted unneeded note. --- mrk/03/31.md | 4 ---- 1 file changed, 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/mrk/03/31.md b/mrk/03/31.md index 9e77001310..7ec07d5674 100644 --- a/mrk/03/31.md +++ b/mrk/03/31.md @@ -1,7 +1,3 @@ -# Then his mother and his brothers came - - - # They sent for him, summoning him "They sent someone inside to tell him that they were outside and to have him come out to them" From 92298b0fa4cd4380a0f7720deb4a7296af8190a7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:42:57 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 40/78] Fixed syntax. --- lam/03/40.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/lam/03/40.md b/lam/03/40.md index 5414d203c0..71e6f5b8d2 100644 --- a/lam/03/40.md +++ b/lam/03/40.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -The writer speaks again about the suffering that God has caused to Jerusalem, but here he speaks of "we" and "us," not "I" and "me." -In verse 42 the author starts a prayer that he and the people of Israel should pray. +The writer speaks again about the suffering that God has caused to Jerusalem, but here he speaks of "we" and "us," not "I" and "me." In verse 42 the author starts a prayer that he and the people of Israel should pray. # let us return to Yahweh From 117ade0afd1788345a8d1f5c259b5163def25eb0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:43:19 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 41/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/02/05.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/02/05.md b/act/02/05.md index 8f2f982e12..154022785e 100644 --- a/act/02/05.md +++ b/act/02/05.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Verse 5 gives background information about the large number of Jews who were living in Jerusalem, many of whom were present during this event. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-background]]) -Here the word "them" refers to the believers; the word "his" refers to each person in the multitude. +Here the word "them" refers to the believers; the word "his" refers to each person in the multitude. Verse 5 gives background information about the large number of Jews who were living in Jerusalem, many of whom were present during this event. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-background]]) # godly men From af0f00b9356e9bb78ed5ba8ab3503fa1d42dcb67 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:43:59 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 42/78] Fixed syntax. --- job/38/32.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/job/38/32.md b/job/38/32.md index f63d400fc4..12619a03cd 100644 --- a/job/38/32.md +++ b/job/38/32.md @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ groups of stars that seem like they form a particular shape in the sky # the Bear -This is the name of a constellation. Translate as in [Job 9:9](../09/07). +This is the name of a constellation. Translate as in [Job 9:9](../09/09). # its children From 696c1bb873c3b6164a69c2492d251f030c13ec50 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:44:11 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 43/78] Fixed syntax. --- dan/07/25.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/dan/07/25.md b/dan/07/25.md index 31d6ac9655..756c4c21ab 100644 --- a/dan/07/25.md +++ b/dan/07/25.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -The man in Daniel's vision continues talking to Daniel. -Most of the text of verses 23-27 is symbolic language. For this reason, the ULB presents them in poetic form. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-symlanguage]]) +The man in Daniel's vision continues talking to Daniel. Most of the text of verses 23-27 is symbolic language. For this reason, the ULB presents them in poetic form. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-symlanguage]]) # He will speak words against the Most High From f540752f27474f5b2540ee7a0226184b075d8064 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:44:28 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 44/78] Fixed syntax. --- psa/065/001.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/psa/065/001.md b/psa/065/001.md index 6a35998552..9b5a815796 100644 --- a/psa/065/001.md +++ b/psa/065/001.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) -This psalm is a song of praise. +This psalm is a song of praise. Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) # For the chief musician From 18e3667bf128ab037731b1e8324ba8354f72bf1d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:44:39 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 45/78] Fixed syntax. --- ezk/34/04.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/ezk/34/04.md b/ezk/34/04.md index 4eac378cde..5ad28bc3fa 100644 --- a/ezk/34/04.md +++ b/ezk/34/04.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Yahweh continues giving Ezekiel his message to the leaders of Israel. -Yahweh continues speaking of the people of Israel as if they were a flock of sheep and the leaders of Israel as if they were shepherds who have not cared for the flock. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +Yahweh continues giving Ezekiel his message to the leaders of Israel. Yahweh continues speaking of the people of Israel as if they were a flock of sheep and the leaders of Israel as if they were shepherds who have not cared for the flock. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # have diseases From c61d1c6f1553a2c6ece55881e5704c778d0b2e38 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:44:53 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 46/78] Fixed syntax. --- dan/07/10.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/dan/07/10.md b/dan/07/10.md index 83096bd3c7..a8596ec556 100644 --- a/dan/07/10.md +++ b/dan/07/10.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Daniel continues to describe his vision of the court in heaven and the response to the fourth animal that he saw in [Daniel 7:7](../07/07.md). -Most of the text of verses 9-14 is symbolic language with parallel lines that have similar meaning. For this reason, the ULB and UDB present them in poetic form. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-symlanguage]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) +Daniel continues to describe his vision of the court in heaven and the response to the fourth animal that he saw in [Daniel 7:7](../07/07.md). Most of the text of verses 9-14 is symbolic language with parallel lines that have similar meaning. For this reason, the ULB and UDB present them in poetic form. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-symlanguage]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) # A river of fire flowed out from before him From fb8198b6b9477789bf878fffc627661a28b07269 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:45:18 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 47/78] Fixed syntax. --- deu/33/03.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/deu/33/03.md b/deu/33/03.md index 2dd5a29eb4..269a2c6e11 100644 --- a/deu/33/03.md +++ b/deu/33/03.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Moses continues to bless the tribes of Israel, which he began to do in [Deuteronomy 33:2](../33/02.md). Moses speaks the blessing in the form of short poems. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) -These verses are difficult to understand. +These verses are difficult to understand. Moses continues to bless the tribes of Israel, which he began to do in [Deuteronomy 33:2](../33/02.md). Moses speaks the blessing in the form of short poems. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) # the peoples From f4466906baf1274b6dcd65a2069aea3f931adabf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:46:09 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 48/78] Fixed syntax. --- psa/023/001.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/psa/023/001.md b/psa/023/001.md index 25fb711492..46a0c8f474 100644 --- a/psa/023/001.md +++ b/psa/023/001.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) -In much of this psalm, David writes as if he were a sheep and the Lord were his shepherd. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-exmetaphor]]) +In much of this psalm, David writes as if he were a sheep and the Lord were his shepherd. Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-exmetaphor]]) # Yahweh is my shepherd From d7963f5f44d889d7f6537e64bc53a3d5c4866e9b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:46:21 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 49/78] Fixed syntax. --- jos/02/20.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/02/20.md b/jos/02/20.md index c2e54c3435..742664e628 100644 --- a/jos/02/20.md +++ b/jos/02/20.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -The two Israelite spies continue to speak to Rahab about their promise to her. -The spies required Rahab to remain silent about their visit or they would be free from their oath to protect her family. +The two Israelite spies continue to speak to Rahab about their promise to her. The spies required Rahab to remain silent about their visit or they would be free from their oath to protect her family. # if you speak From cd4af50e812b7b72e5ebfb27452f6dc02db9457d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:49:33 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 50/78] Fixed syntax. --- pro/08/01.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/pro/08/01.md b/pro/08/01.md index 572b9b554e..dba6739b29 100644 --- a/pro/08/01.md +++ b/pro/08/01.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -In chapter 8 wisdom is spoken of as a woman who teaches people how to be wise. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]]) -Many verses in chapter 8 have parallelisms. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) +In chapter 8 wisdom is spoken of as a woman who teaches people how to be wise. Many verses in chapter 8 have parallelisms. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) # Does not Wisdom call out? From 40b7038adf8206d79421f7a2c9503a6389428df4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:50:00 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 51/78] Fixed syntax. --- deu/33/05.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/deu/33/05.md b/deu/33/05.md index eadc46764e..ec023a606f 100644 --- a/deu/33/05.md +++ b/deu/33/05.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Moses continues to bless the tribes of Israel, which he began to do in [Deuteronomy 33:2](../33/02.md). The blessings are short poems. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) -Verse 5 is difficult to understand. +Verse 5 is difficult to understand. Moses continues to bless the tribes of Israel, which he began to do in [Deuteronomy 33:2](../33/02.md). The blessings are short poems. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) # there was a king From a1a92d64b15a099e9b0bf4ded00699464efe169b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:50:12 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 52/78] Fixed syntax. --- psa/058/001.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/psa/058/001.md b/psa/058/001.md index b7c8064d56..c581365a37 100644 --- a/psa/058/001.md +++ b/psa/058/001.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) -This psalm is a song about wicked people. +This psalm is a song about wicked people. Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) # For the chief musician From aff2629415b7b1a77f1228ee5dd0fc14429643a5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:50:36 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 53/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/13/46.md | 4 +--- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/13/46.md b/act/13/46.md index c5542cb198..1bc9b75ff1 100644 --- a/act/13/46.md +++ b/act/13/46.md @@ -1,8 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -The first two instances of the word "you" are plural and refer to the Jews to whom Paul is speaking. -Here the words "we" and "us" refers to Paul and Barnabas but not the crowd that was present. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-exclusive]]) -Paul's quotation is from the prophet Isaiah in the Old Testament. In the original passage, the word "I" refers to God and the word "you" is singular and refers to the Messiah. Here, Paul and Barnabas seem to be saying that the quotation also refers to their ministry. +The first two instances of the word "you" are plural and refer to the Jews to whom Paul is speaking. Here the words "we" and "us" refers to Paul and Barnabas but not the crowd that was present. Paul's quotation is from the prophet Isaiah in the Old Testament. In the original passage, the word "I" refers to God and the word "you" is singular and refers to the Messiah. Here, Paul and Barnabas seem to be saying that the quotation also refers to their ministry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-exclusive]]) # It was necessary From 432eaacdad4d2672c79f4f253865d88eb2e40aba Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:51:03 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 54/78] Fixed syntax. --- 2jn/01/01.md | 4 +--- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/2jn/01/01.md b/2jn/01/01.md index 3aa1ac9ec0..552a561b1f 100644 --- a/2jn/01/01.md +++ b/2jn/01/01.md @@ -1,8 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Tradition identifies the apostle John as the writer of this letter. Though possibly addressed to an individual woman, because he writes that they should "love one another," this is probably to a church. -All instances of "you" and "your" in this letter are plural unless noted otherwise. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) -In this letter, John includes himself and his readers by using the word "us" and "our" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]]) +Tradition identifies the apostle John as the writer of this letter. Though possibly addressed to an individual woman, because he writes that they should "love one another," this is probably to a church. All instances of "you" and "your" in this letter are plural unless noted otherwise. In this letter, John includes himself and his readers by using the word "us" and "our." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]]) # From the elder to the chosen lady and her children From 608809f341844add1d98ae30319362e4a71abf8b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:51:59 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 55/78] Fixed syntax. --- ezk/34/17.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/ezk/34/17.md b/ezk/34/17.md index d8ceeb2775..5e53ae89d1 100644 --- a/ezk/34/17.md +++ b/ezk/34/17.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Yahweh continues to give Ezekiel his message. Now it is to the people of Israel. -Yahweh continues speaking of the people of Israel as if they were a flock of sheep and of himself as their shepherd. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +Yahweh continues to give Ezekiel his message. Now it is to the people of Israel. Yahweh continues speaking of the people of Israel as if they were a flock of sheep and of himself as their shepherd. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # behold, I From 0b2fd494ba13b6278d804a5d21fd943574337948 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:52:50 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 56/78] Pending issue --- act/21/38.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/act/21/38.md b/act/21/38.md index 0d8f4cb104..13057f7b38 100644 --- a/act/21/38.md +++ b/act/21/38.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# pending issue +# pending ULB issue #1618 # Are you not then the Egyptian, who previously led a rebellion and led the four thousand men of the 'Assassins' out into the wilderness? From bc5335af6cef33b1b6e9f8e2cc5a366934f2699b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:53:09 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 57/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/18/18.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/18/18.md b/act/18/18.md index 1087d70178..ae71c4544e 100644 --- a/act/18/18.md +++ b/act/18/18.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Cenchreae was a seaport that was part of the greater Corinth city area. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) -Here the word "he" refers to Paul. +Here the word "he" refers to Paul. Cenchreae was a seaport that was part of the greater Corinth city area. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) # Connecting Statement: From b2241253e7531b08c3abc786b32f84e90aec04af Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:56:06 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 58/78] Added missing notes. --- mat/05/47.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/mat/05/47.md b/mat/05/47.md index d6b0dc0561..bfa52ade55 100644 --- a/mat/05/47.md +++ b/mat/05/47.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# If you greet only your brothers, what do you do more than others? +# what do you do more than others? -# greet +This question can be translated as a statement. Alternate translation: "you do nothing more than others." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) # greet @@ -8,5 +8,5 @@ This is a general term for showing a desire for the well-being of the hearer. # Do not even the Gentiles do the same thing? - +This question can be translated as a statement. Alternate translation: "Even the Gentiles do the same thing." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) From e275cde8df52ff2ea183db25d1aa46d0989c99b2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 21:57:19 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 59/78] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- mrk/07/11.md | 5 ----- 1 file changed, 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/mrk/07/11.md b/mrk/07/11.md index 04d3a090b3..a656adb485 100644 --- a/mrk/07/11.md +++ b/mrk/07/11.md @@ -1,8 +1,3 @@ -# General Information: - -In verses 11 and 12, Jesus shows how the Pharisees teach people that they do not have to obey God's commandment to honor their parents. -In verse 11 Jesus tells what the Pharisees allow people to say about their possessions, and in verse 12 he tells how that shows the Pharisees' attitude toward people helping their parents. This information can be reordered to first tell about the Pharisees' attitude toward people helping their parents and then tell how that attitude is shown in what the Pharisees allow people to say about their possessions. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-versebridge]]) - # Whatever help you would have received from me is Corban The tradition of the scribes said that once money or other things were promised to the temple, they could not be used for any other purpose. From 24640ce00dd52d87a1d5f111ff77d7980c56b9d6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:02:59 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 60/78] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- mrk/07/12.md | 5 ++++- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/mrk/07/12.md b/mrk/07/12.md index 07b2daa893..b66031f592 100644 --- a/mrk/07/12.md +++ b/mrk/07/12.md @@ -1,4 +1,7 @@ +# General Information: + +In verses 11 and 12, Jesus shows how the Pharisees teach people that they do not have to obey God's commandment to honor their parents. In verse 11 Jesus tells what the Pharisees allow people to say about their possessions, and in verse 12 he tells how that shows the Pharisees' attitude toward people helping their parents. This information can be reordered to first tell about the Pharisees' attitude toward people helping their parents and then tell how that attitude is shown in what the Pharisees allow people to say about their possessions. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-versebridge]]) # then you no longer permit him to do anything for his father or his mother -By doing this, the Pharisees are allowing people not to provide for their parents, if they promise to give to God what they would have given to them. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) +By doing this, the Pharisees are allowing people not to provide for their parents, if they promise to give to God what they would have given to them. You can order these words before the words that begin with "Whatever help" in verse 11: "You no longer permit a person to do anything for his father or his mother after he says, 'Whatever help you would have received from me is Corban.' (Corban means 'Given to God.')" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) From d489d589f1d95cf5045f5cda43824be6fd16b698 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:04:32 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 61/78] Update '2sa/07/05.md' --- 2sa/07/05.md | 2 -- 1 file changed, 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/2sa/07/05.md b/2sa/07/05.md index b88fa7cb84..1be9422d16 100644 --- a/2sa/07/05.md +++ b/2sa/07/05.md @@ -1,5 +1,3 @@ -# pending issue - # "Go and tell David my servant, 'This is what Yahweh says: Will you build ...? This is the beginning of a quotation that contains quotations within it. From 8121341444828c347846dcf938c8c17d9d971fc6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:04:44 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 62/78] Fixed syntax. --- jud/01/01.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/jud/01/01.md b/jud/01/01.md index 00ce49dfae..1209a08037 100644 --- a/jud/01/01.md +++ b/jud/01/01.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Jude identifies himself as the writer of this letter and greets his readers. He was probably the half-brother of Jesus. There are two other Judes mentioned in the New Testament. -The word "you" in this letter refers to the Christians to whom Jude was writing and is always plural. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) +Jude identifies himself as the writer of this letter and greets his readers. He was probably the half-brother of Jesus. There are two other Judes mentioned in the New Testament. The word "you" in this letter refers to the Christians to whom Jude was writing and is always plural. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) # Jude, a servant of From ace29152b90ca4e1060c41e850336d007d646e6a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:05:15 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 63/78] Fixed syntax. --- 1jn/01/01.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/1jn/01/01.md b/1jn/01/01.md index c20b65770b..a48b1afba8 100644 --- a/1jn/01/01.md +++ b/1jn/01/01.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -The apostle John wrote this letter to believers. All instances of "you," "your," and "yours" include all believers and are plural. Here the words "we" and "us" refer to John and those who had been with Jesus. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-exclusive]]) -In verses 1-2 many pronouns like "that," "which," and "it" are used. They refer to "the Word of life" and "the eternal life." But, since these are names for Jesus, you can use pronouns that refer to a person like "who," "whom" or "he." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-pronouns]]) +The apostle John wrote this letter to believers. All instances of "you," "your," and "yours" include all believers and are plural. Here the words "we" and "us" refer to John and those who had been with Jesus. In verses 1-2 many pronouns like "that," "which," and "it" are used. They refer to "the Word of life" and "the eternal life." But, since these are names for Jesus, you can use pronouns that refer to a person like "who," "whom" or "he." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-exclusive]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-pronouns]]) # which we have heard From d72805aa7e448dd61186179d04afe45ae2a689df Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:05:36 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 64/78] Fixed syntax. --- dan/04/23.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/dan/04/23.md b/dan/04/23.md index 9704d4b612..2eb07c2cae 100644 --- a/dan/04/23.md +++ b/dan/04/23.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Verses 19-33 use the third person to describe the punishment of Nebuchadnezzar. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-123person]]) -This verse is almost the same as [Daniel 4:13-14](./13.md) and [Daniel 4:15-16](./15.md). See how you translated those verses. +This verse is almost the same as [Daniel 4:13-14](./13.md) and [Daniel 4:15-16](./15.md). See how you translated those verses. Verses 19-33 use the third person to describe the punishment of Nebuchadnezzar. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-123person]]) # the stump of its roots From 10f1585a268d486fbbc9aba1c3c0498a413bf49b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:06:01 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 65/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/28/25.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/28/25.md b/act/28/25.md index d2f7fab19a..7396aebacc 100644 --- a/act/28/25.md +++ b/act/28/25.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Here the word "they" refers to the Jewish leaders in Rome. (See: [Acts 28:17](../28/17.md)) -The word "your" refers to the people to whom Paul had been speaking. In verse 26, Paul begins to quote the prophet Isaiah. +Here the word "they" refers to the Jewish leaders in Rome ([Acts 28:17](../28/17.md)). The word "your" refers to the people to whom Paul had been speaking. In verse 26, Paul begins to quote the prophet Isaiah. # Connecting Statement: From 32485631f31791ede05a17dea46d32a3626ebd29 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:06:13 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 66/78] Fixed syntax. --- ezk/34/11.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/ezk/34/11.md b/ezk/34/11.md index e75d43e23e..5895d2bd9d 100644 --- a/ezk/34/11.md +++ b/ezk/34/11.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Yahweh continues giving Ezekiel his message to the leaders of Israel. -Yahweh continues speaking of the people of Israel as if they were a flock of sheep. Here he speaks of himself as if he were their shepherd and will take care of them. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +Yahweh continues giving Ezekiel his message to the leaders of Israel. Yahweh continues speaking of the people of Israel as if they were a flock of sheep. Here he speaks of himself as if he were their shepherd and will take care of them. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # For the Lord Yahweh says this From f8dc063d6c6da9bd1a5681df5d1237f65cf3af5a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:06:49 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 67/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/17/19.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/17/19.md b/act/17/19.md index a5a925e64e..d56c16bd6f 100644 --- a/act/17/19.md +++ b/act/17/19.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Here the words "They" and "we" refer to the Epicurean and Stoic philosophers. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-exclusive]]) -The words "him," "He" and "you" refer to Paul. (See: [Acts 17:18](../17/18.md)) +The words "him," "He" and "you" refer to Paul ([Acts 17:18](../17/18.md)). Here the words "They" and "we" refer to the Epicurean and Stoic philosophers. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-exclusive]]) # They took ... brought him From 436bbdf2f0cff20527274e5215a6d4b193f14036 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:07:24 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 68/78] Update 'rev/02/17.md' --- rev/02/17.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/rev/02/17.md b/rev/02/17.md index 6c63d3617a..e3516f6161 100644 --- a/rev/02/17.md +++ b/rev/02/17.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Let the one who has an ear, listen to +# Let the one who has an ear listen to Jesus is emphasizing that what he has just said is important and may take some effort to understand and put into practice. The phrase "has an ear" here is a metonym for the willingness to understand and obey. See how you translated this phrase in [Revelation 2:7](../02/07.md). Alternate translation: "Let the one who is willing to listen, listen to" or "The one who is willing to understand, let him understand and obey" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) From aec3621ae5b8090862dbedd53d461ab7ef58cf98 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:07:41 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 69/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/08/32.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/08/32.md b/act/08/32.md index 03351a0e5d..4f7c799e25 100644 --- a/act/08/32.md +++ b/act/08/32.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -This a passage from the book of Isaiah. -Here the words "he" and "his" refer to the Messiah. +This a passage from the book of Isaiah. Here the words "he" and "his" refer to the Messiah. # like a lamb before his shearer is silent From d19cb6b8a04a95e0b79c62864d19c5c05f3f8196 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:08:26 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 70/78] Fixed syntax. --- psa/149/001.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/psa/149/001.md b/psa/149/001.md index 805bf9c6ad..920aa132c7 100644 --- a/psa/149/001.md +++ b/psa/149/001.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) -The psalmist is speaking to all of God's people, so you should use the plural command form if your language has one. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-pronouns]]) +The psalmist is speaking to all of God's people, so you should use the plural command form if your language has one. Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-pronouns]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) # a new song From d27eff5e400ec00e92b4a7764c4d5da042e0b009 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:08:44 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 71/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/23/31.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/23/31.md b/act/23/31.md index 310f951800..68f5d44503 100644 --- a/act/23/31.md +++ b/act/23/31.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Antipatris was a city built by Herod in honor of his father, Antipater. It stood at a site located today in central Israel. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) -Here the first word "him" refers to Paul; the second use of the word "him" refers to Governor Felix. +Here the first word "him" refers to Paul; the second use of the word "him" refers to Governor Felix. Antipatris was a city built by Herod in honor of his father, Antipater. It stood at a site located today in central Israel. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) # Connecting Statement: From 3d995377c7ff64ca8fb866624189235b8db0fcfe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:09:10 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 72/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/20/04.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/20/04.md b/act/20/04.md index 98cffaa056..ae24a0ffb2 100644 --- a/act/20/04.md +++ b/act/20/04.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Here the word "him" refers to Paul. (See: [Acts 20:1](../20/01.md)) -All instances of "us" and "we" refer to the writer and Paul and those traveling with them, but not to the reader. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-exclusive]]) +Here the word "him" refers to Paul ([Acts 20:1](../20/01.md)). All instances of "us" and "we" refer to the writer and Paul and those traveling with them, but not to the reader. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-exclusive]]) # Accompanying him From 71a0d0cf2b24087b5c22b7d56b317714d01f81c5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:10:36 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 73/78] Update 'lev/01/12.md' --- lev/01/12.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/lev/01/12.md b/lev/01/12.md index a4f58b50e2..080d291d72 100644 --- a/lev/01/12.md +++ b/lev/01/12.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Pending issue +# Pending issue ULB #1584 # General Information: Yahweh continues telling Moses what the people must do. From e17a141aa2da84c26397b06430272383987cdb13 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:10:50 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 74/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/25/06.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/25/06.md b/act/25/06.md index b08303cf5d..655750eaa8 100644 --- a/act/25/06.md +++ b/act/25/06.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Here the first three times the word "he" is used as well as the word "him," the words refer to Festus. The fourth word "he" refers to Paul. -The word "they" refers to the Jews who came from Jerusalem. +Here the first three times the word "he" is used as well as the word "him," the words refer to Festus. The fourth word "he" refers to Paul. The word "they" refers to the Jews who came from Jerusalem. # down to Caesarea From ee22401263ac2dae01c9655b7cdeb78b2008c9fb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:11:00 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 75/78] Fixed syntax. --- ezk/27/04.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/ezk/27/04.md b/ezk/27/04.md index 1299ef686c..56d9063fe9 100644 --- a/ezk/27/04.md +++ b/ezk/27/04.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -"Your" and "you" in these verses refer to Tyre. -The city of Tyre is described here and in the following verses as if it were a beautiful ship. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +"Your" and "you" in these verses refer to Tyre. The city of Tyre is described here and in the following verses as if it were a beautiful ship. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # Connecting Statement: From 5d63ae234c1cc6bf017d17cf707aad9ee9526fc6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:12:03 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 76/78] Added missing note. --- jhn/01/14.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jhn/01/14.md b/jhn/01/14.md index 03eb8f0732..5883308e25 100644 --- a/jhn/01/14.md +++ b/jhn/01/14.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Here "flesh" represents "a person" or "a human being." Alternate translation: "b # the one and only who came from the Father - +"the one, the only one, who came from the Father # Father From 05bc859e4db3abcf814e24b3593db344b130ca88 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:12:21 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 77/78] Fixed syntax. --- act/02/32.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/02/32.md b/act/02/32.md index 8848b4b673..c18471e308 100644 --- a/act/02/32.md +++ b/act/02/32.md @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -The word "we" refers to the disciples and those that witnessed the risen Jesus after his death. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-exclusive]]) -Here, the second word "this" refers to the disciples' speaking in other languages when they received the Holy Spirit. +Here, the second word "this" refers to the disciples' speaking in other languages when they received the Holy Spirit. The word "we" refers to the disciples and those that witnessed the risen Jesus after his death. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-exclusive]]) # God raised him up From 7ff4221713c3c7c829bdc7a1c65ccbcfd742ea77 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 22:12:42 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 78/78] Fixed syntax. --- mat/12/41.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/mat/12/41.md b/mat/12/41.md index ea3d08ba7b..b514ab3e44 100644 --- a/mat/12/41.md +++ b/mat/12/41.md @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ This refers to the people living during the time Jesus was preaching. # and will condemn it - +"and will condemn all those people" # and see