diff --git a/dan/10/11.md b/dan/10/11.md index c3737e7cdd..822363fca8 100644 --- a/dan/10/11.md +++ b/dan/10/11.md @@ -1,8 +1,4 @@ -# Daniel, man greatly treasured +# Daniel, precious man -This can also be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Daniel, you whom God greatly treasures" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) - -# greatly treasured - -much valued and loved +"Daniel, you who are precious to God" diff --git a/dan/10/19.md b/dan/10/19.md index 593a0346e5..09ecfeded0 100644 --- a/dan/10/19.md +++ b/dan/10/19.md @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ The words "be strong" are repeated for emphasis. -# man greatly treasured +# precious man -This can also be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "you whom God greatly treasures" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) +"you who are precious to God" # I was strengthened