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 # It came about
 
-This phrase is used here to mark an important event in the story. The important event here is the people seeing Yahweh's glory. If your language has a way for doing this, you could consider using it here.
+This phrase is used here to mark an important event in the story, which is the people seeing Yahweh's glory. If your language has a way for doing this, you could consider using it here.
 
 # behold