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# When he mentioned

"When the man of Benjamin mentioned"

# mentioned

"spoke of"

# His neck was broken

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "His neck broke because he fell" or "He broke his neck when he fell" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`# When he mentioned`

			`"When the man of Benjamin mentioned"`

			`# mentioned`

			`"spoke of"`

			`# His neck was broken`

Replace all AT: with Alternate translation: 2018-02-10 00:34:10 +00:00			`This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "His neck broke because he fell" or "He broke his neck when he fell" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`
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