# the time for his land comes

You may need to make explicit the nature of the time. Alternate translation: "the time for me to destroy his land" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])

# subdue him

Here "him" refers to Nebuchadnezzar who represents the kingdom of Babylon. Alternate translation: "will defeat Babylon" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])