# he allowed them

It may be helpful to state clearly what Jesus allowed them to do. Alternate translation: "Jesus allowed the unclean spirits to do what they asked permission to do" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])

# they rushed

"the pigs rushed"

# into the sea, and about two thousand pigs drowned in the sea

You can make this a separate sentence: "into the sea. There were about two thousand pigs, and they drowned in the sea"

# about two thousand pigs

"about 2,000 pigs" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]])