# the captain had given him permission

The word "permission" can be stated as a verb. Alternate translation: "the captain permitted Paul to speak" or "the captain allowed Paul to speak" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns]])

# Paul stood on the steps

The word "steps" here refers to the steps on the stairway to the fortress.

# motioned with the hand to the people

It can be stated explicitly why Paul motioned with the hand. Alternate translation: "motioned with his hand for the people to be quiet" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]])

# When there was a deep silence

"When the people were completely silent"