# He will cut away

Here "He" refers to the person offering the sacrifice.

# just as the fat of the lamb is cut away

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "just as a person cuts away the fat of the lamb" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

# the priest will burn it

"the priest will burn the fat"

# offerings of Yahweh made by fire

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "burnt offerings for Yahweh" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

# will make atonement for him for the sin he has committed

The abstract noun "atonement" can be stated as a verb. Alternate translation: "will atone for the sin the person committed" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]])

# the man will be forgiven

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Yahweh will forgive the man's sins" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])