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-# such a person
+# No one's hand may touch him
 
-"a person who does that" or "a person who touches the mountain"
+The word "him" refers to anyone who touches the mountain. Alternate translation: "No one's hand may touch anyone who does that" or "No one may touch anyone who touches the mountain"
+
+# Whether an animal or a man
+
+"Whether he is an animal or a man" or "Whether it is an animal or a man that touches the mountain"
 
 # he must certainly be stoned or shot
 
-This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "you must certainly stone or shoot him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]])
+This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "you must certainly stone him or shoot him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]])
 
-# shot
+# be ... shot
 
-This refers to being killed by someone who shoots arrows from a bow or stones from a slingshot.
+This refers to being killed by someone who shoots arrows from a bow.
 
 # a long blast