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-# These days were to be celebrated and observed
+# These days were to be remembered and celebrated
 
-This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "The Jews were to celebrate and observe these days" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]])
+This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "The Jews were to remember and celebrate these days" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]])
 
-# would never cease to faithfully observe
+# These days of Purim should never fail from among the Jews
 
-This can be stated positively. Alternate translation: "would always faithfully observe"
+"The Jews should never fail to celebrate these days of Purim"
+
+# their memory should never come to an end for their descendants
+
+"the memory of those days should never come to an end for the descendants of the Jews" or "the descendants of the Jews should never forget those days"