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 # these dreamers
 
-the people who disobey God, probably because they claimed to see visions that gave them authority to do so
+These are the people who disobey God, probably because they claim to have seen visions that gave them authority to do so.
 
 # pollute their bodies
 
-This metaphor says that their sin makes their bodies—that is, their actions—unacceptable the way garbage in a stream makes the water undrinkable. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+The people sinning is spoken of as if they were making their bodies unclean. Alternate translation: "sin and defile themselves" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
 # say slanderous things