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-# I persecuted this Way
+# I persecuted this Way to the death
 
-Here "this Way" represents the people who belonged to the group called "the Way." Alternate translation: "I persecuted the people who belonged to this Way" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+Here "this Way" represents the people who belonged to the group called "the Way." The word "death" can be translated with the verb "kill." Alternate translation: "I persecuted the people who belonged to this Way and I looked for ways to kill them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]])
 
 # this Way
 
 This was a term used to refer to Christianity. See how you translated "the Way" in [Acts 9:2](../09/02.md).
 
-# to the death
-
-The word "death" can be translated with the verb "kill" or "die." Alternate translation: "and I looked for ways to kill them" or "and I even caused them to die" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]])
-
 # binding up and delivering them to prison, both men and women
 
 "tying up both men and women and taking them to prison"