From 64ee470c503d00d2b97b2e6014d9e592295a8c10 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Susan Quigley Date: Tue, 30 Oct 2018 13:12:13 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Update 'est/04/11.md' --- est/04/11.md | 10 +++++++++- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/est/04/11.md b/est/04/11.md index 5c55105218..364bd5317e 100644 --- a/est/04/11.md +++ b/est/04/11.md @@ -1,6 +1,14 @@ # if any man or woman goes to the king ... the king holds out the golden scepter -This conditional clause can be expressed as a statement. It may also be helpful to divide it into two sentences. Alternate translation: "no man or woman is allowed to go to the king inside the inner courtyard unless the king summons them. The person who breaks this law will be executed unless the king holds out his golden scepter to him" +The conditional clause starting with "if" can be expressed as a statement. It may also be helpful to divide this sentence into two sentences. Alternate translation: "no man or woman is allowed to go to the king inside the inner courtyard without being summoned. The person who breaks this law will be be put to death unless the king holds out his golden scepter to him" + +# without being summoned + +This can be expressed in active form. Alternate translation: "without the king summoning him" or "unless the king summons him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) + +# he must be put to death + +"he must be killed" or "he must be executed" # thirty days