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 # General Information:
 
-The words "we" and "us" refer to the author and his readers. The word "you" is plural and here refers to the readers. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]])
+The words "we" and "us" refer to the author and his readers. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]])
 
 # Connecting Statement:
 
-Because of this great number of Old Testament believers, the author talks of the life of faith that believers should live with Jesus as their example.
+Because of this great number of Old Testament believers, the author talks of the life of faith that believers should live.
 
 # we are surrounded by such a large cloud of witnesses
 
-The writer speaks about the Old Testament believers as if they were a cloud that surrounded the present-day believers. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "such a large cloud of witnesses surrounds us" or "there are so many examples of faithful people about whom we learn in the scriptures" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
+The writer speaks about the Old Testament believers as if they were a cloud that surrounds the present-day believers. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "such a large cloud of witnesses surrounds us" or "there are so many examples of faithful people about whom we learn in the scriptures" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
 # witnesses
 
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Here "weight" and "easily entangling sin" are spoken of as if a person could tak
 
 # every weight
 
-Attitudes or habits that keep believers from trusting and obeying God are spoken of as if they were loads that would make it difficult for a person to carry while running. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+Attitudes or habits that keep believers from trusting and obeying God are spoken of as if they were loads that would make it difficult for a person to run while carrying. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
 # easily entangling sin