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-# keeping covenant faithfulness for thousands of generations
+# keeping steadfast love for thousands
 
-The abstract noun "faithfulness" can be stated as "faithfully" or "faithful." See how you translated a similar phrase in [Exodus 20:6](../20/06.md). Alternate translation: "faithfully loving thousands of generations" or "faithful to his covenant with thousands of generation" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]])
+See how you translated a similar phrase in [Exodus 20:6](../20/06.md). Alternate translation: "continuing to faithfully love thousands" or "faithful to his covenant with thousands" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]])
 
-# But he will
-
-Yahweh is speaking about himself. Alternate translation: "But I will" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-123person]])
+# thousands
+"thousands of people." This refers to a great number of people. It may be that "generation" is implied. Alternate translation: "thousands of generations" or "the thousandth generation" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit)
 
 # he will by no means clear the guilty
 
@@ -20,5 +19,5 @@ Punishing people is spoken of as if punishment were an object that someone could
 
 # their children
 
-The word "children" represents descendants. Alternate translation: "their descendants" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+The word "children" refers to sons and daughters.