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pro/03/32.md

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-# the devious person is detestable to Yahweh
+# the devious person is an abomination to Yahweh
 
-"Yahweh detests the devious person"
+"Yahweh strongly hates the devious person"
 
 # the devious person
 

pro/06/16.md

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 This whole verse is a parallelism that emphasizes that God hates several things and not just one. Alternate translation: "six things that Yahwah hates; seven things that" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-parallelism]])
 
-# that are disgusting to him
+# that are an abomination to him
 
-"that make him feel disgust" or "that make you disgusting according to him"
+"that he strongly hates." See how you translated "abomination" in [Proverbs 3:2](../03..02.md).
 

pro/08/07.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Here "mouth" represents a person who speaks. Alternate translation: "I speak" (S
 
 # wickedness is an abomination to my lips
 
-Here "lips" represents a person who is speaking. Alternate translation: "wickedness is an abomination to me" or "saying wicked things would be an abomination to me" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]])
+Here "lips" represents a person who is speaking. See how you translated "abomination" in [Proverbs 3:2](../03..02.md). Alternate translation: "wickedness is an abomination to me" or "saying wicked things would be an abomination to me" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]])
 
 # wickedness
 

pro/11/01.md

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 # False scales are an abomination to Yahweh
 
-"Scales" represent measuring accurately in negotiating. Alternate translation: "Yahweh hates deceiving scales" or "Yahweh hates it when people deceive their neighbors" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+"Scales" represent measuring accurately in negotiating. See how you translated "abomination" in [Proverbs 3:2](../03..02.md). Alternate translation: "Yahweh hates deceiving scales" or "Yahweh hates it when people deceive their neighbors" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
 
 # but he delights in a precise weight
 

pro/11/20.md

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+# Those whose hearts are perverse are an abomination to Yahweh
+
+"Yahweh strongly hates those whose hearts are perverse." See how you translated "abomination" in [Proverbs 3:2](../03..02.md).
+
 # whose hearts are perverse
 
 "Heart" represents the feelings, attitudes and motivations of a person. Alternate translation: "who have wicked thoughts" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])

pro/12/22.md

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 # Lying lips are an abomination to Yahweh
 
-"Lips" are either a metonym for the words a person says or a synecdoche for the person himself. Alternate translation: "Lies are an abomination to Yahweh" or "People who tell lies are an abomination to Yahweh" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+"Yahweh strongly hates lying lips." See how you translated "abomination" in [Proverbs 3:2](../03..02.md).
+
+# Lying lips
+
+"Lips" are either a metonym for the words a person says or a synecdoche for the person himself. Alternate translation: "Lies" or "People who tell lies" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
 

pro/13/19.md

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 the desire or liking for something
 
+# turning away from evil is an abomination to fools
+
+"fools strongly hate to turn away from evil." See how you translated "abomination" in [Proverbs 3:2](../03..02.md).
+

pro/15/02.md

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 Here the word "tongue" refers to the person who speaks. Alternate translation: "Wise people compliment knowledge when they speak" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]])
 
-# compliments knowledge
+# complements knowledge
 
-"makes knowledge attractive" or "uses knowledge correctly"
+Possible meanings are 1) "makes knowledge attractive" or 2) "uses knowledge correctly."
 
 # the mouth of fools pours out folly
 

pro/15/08.md

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+# The sacrifice of the wicked is an abomination to Yahweh
+
+"Yahweh strongly hates the sacrifices that wicked people offer." See how you translated "abomination" in [Proverbs 3:2](../03..02.md).
+
 # the upright
 
 "the person who lives rightly" or "people who live rightly"

pro/15/09.md

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-# Yahweh hates the way of wicked people
+# The way of wicked people is an abomination to Yahweh
 
-The lifestyles of wicked people are spoken of as if they are paths on which those people walk. Alternate translation: "Yahweh hates the way that wicked people live" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+The lifestyles of wicked people are spoken of as if they are paths on which those people walk. See how you translated "abomination" in [Proverbs 3:2](../03..02.md). Alternate translation: "Yahweh strongly hates the way that wicked people live" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
 
 # the one who pursues what is right
 

pro/15/26.md

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+# The thoughts of the wicked are an abomination to Yahweh
+
+"Yahweh strongly hates the thoughts of wicked people." See how you translated "abomination" in [Proverbs 3:2](../03..02.md).
+
 # the words of kindness are pure
 
 "kind words are pure" or "pleasant words are pure"

pro/16/05.md

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-# everyone who has an arrogant heart
+# Every exalted heart is an abomination to Yahweh
 
-Here the word "heart" represents the person. Alternate translation: "everyone who is arrogant" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]])
+"Yahweh strongly hates every exalted heart." See how you translated "abomination" in [Proverbs 3:2](../03..02.md).
+
+# every exalted heart
+
+Here the word "exalted" is a metaphor for "arrogant" because the person himself exalts his heart rather than allowing God or other people to exalt it. The word "heart" represents the person. Alternate translation: "everyone who is arrogant" or "every arrogant person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]])
 
 # they will not go unpunished