From 614759ab4a2c2cbf62c8cf2176814f62fc082670 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SusanQuigley Date: Thu, 9 Feb 2023 21:37:34 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 1/9] Update 'jer/40/14.md' Updated "Ahikam" because of ULB issue 1168 Jer 40:14 Audio Team: Ahikim vs Ahikam --- jer/40/14.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jer/40/14.md b/jer/40/14.md index f5943b1e34..a4c2e086c2 100644 --- a/jer/40/14.md +++ b/jer/40/14.md @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ This is the name of a man. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-names]]) Translate these names as in [Jeremiah 40:8](../40/08.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-names]]) -# Ahikim +# Ahikam See how you translated this name in [Jeremiah 26:24](../26/24.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-names]]) From cf84fb6b9a242303c91d7e03f5ca9add00058758 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SusanQuigley Date: Thu, 9 Feb 2023 21:44:14 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 2/9] Update 'num/14/04.md' Updated snippet because of ULB Issue 1165 Num 14:4 Audio Team. "each another" --- num/14/04.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/num/14/04.md b/num/14/04.md index f67734371a..71178ca232 100644 --- a/num/14/04.md +++ b/num/14/04.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# They said to each another +# They said to one another This refers to the people of Israel. From 85b82ce1369b4a1e7cd724dc4bc604de93280979 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SusanQuigley Date: Thu, 9 Feb 2023 21:47:58 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 3/9] Update 'num/07/61.md' Updated snippet because of ULB issue 1164 Num 7:61, 73 & 8:8 Audio Team "mingled" --- num/07/61.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/num/07/61.md b/num/07/61.md index 6aeef2b2a6..ea929d6172 100644 --- a/num/07/61.md +++ b/num/07/61.md @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ If necessary, these weights can be written in modern measurements. See how you t There were shekels of different weights. This is the one that people had to use in the sanctuary of the sacred tent. See how you translated this phrase in [Numbers 7:13](../07/13.md). Alternate translation: "measured by the standard weights used in the sanctuary" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-bweight]]) -# fine flour mingled with oil +# fine flour mixed with oil This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "fine flour that he had mixed with oil" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) From a6c1e47a7cf841c4b062eb3429261069d8821818 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SusanQuigley Date: Thu, 9 Feb 2023 21:48:33 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 4/9] Update 'num/07/73.md' Updated snippet because of ULB issue 1164 Num 7:61, 73 & 8:8 Audio Team "mingled" --- num/07/73.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/num/07/73.md b/num/07/73.md index 6aeef2b2a6..ea929d6172 100644 --- a/num/07/73.md +++ b/num/07/73.md @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ If necessary, these weights can be written in modern measurements. See how you t There were shekels of different weights. This is the one that people had to use in the sanctuary of the sacred tent. See how you translated this phrase in [Numbers 7:13](../07/13.md). Alternate translation: "measured by the standard weights used in the sanctuary" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-bweight]]) -# fine flour mingled with oil +# fine flour mixed with oil This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "fine flour that he had mixed with oil" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) From 5c0af55b616e3e2bca76687896e70801f82dc5fb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SusanQuigley Date: Thu, 9 Feb 2023 21:48:57 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 5/9] Update 'num/08/08.md' Updated snippet because of ULB issue 1164 Num 7:61, 73 & 8:8 Audio Team "mingled" --- num/08/08.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/num/08/08.md b/num/08/08.md index a3f5ea2d18..45c106f678 100644 --- a/num/08/08.md +++ b/num/08/08.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ When offering a young bull, a grain offering was usually required to accompany it. -# of fine flour mingled with oil +# of fine flour mixed with oil This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "of fine flour that they have mingled with oil" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) From bc6a2316e41f5b8d4050fe052d934de64ddce1f1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SusanQuigley Date: Tue, 21 Feb 2023 15:25:59 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 6/9] Luk 22:26 Added line space before last note --- luk/22/26.md | 1 + 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+) diff --git a/luk/22/26.md b/luk/22/26.md index 4e181a8823..f32d78a69f 100644 --- a/luk/22/26.md +++ b/luk/22/26.md @@ -14,6 +14,7 @@ Older people were respected in that culture. The leaders were usually older peop # and the one who leads like the one who serves Words from the phrase before this apply to this phrase. Alternate translation: "and let the one who leads become like the one who serves" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-ellipsis]]) + # the one who serves "a servant" From 490b79572d280074e05f5a0d9142fdd5e4e89c33 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SusanQuigley Date: Thu, 30 Nov 2023 17:59:48 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 7/9] Update 'rev/front/intro.md' Corrected verse reference in outline. --- rev/front/intro.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/rev/front/intro.md b/rev/front/intro.md index fe016e3a7e..ea334e2aff 100644 --- a/rev/front/intro.md +++ b/rev/front/intro.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ 1. Worshipers of the Lamb, the martyrs, and the harvest of wrath (14:1-20) 1. The seven bowls (15:1-18:24) 1. Worship in heaven (19:1-10) -1. The Lamb's judgment, the destruction of the beast, the thousand years, the destruction of Satan, and the final judgment (20:11-15) +1. The Lamb's judgment, the destruction of the beast, the thousand years, the destruction of Satan, and the final judgment (19:11-20:15) 1. The new creation and the new Jerusalem (21:1-22:5) 1. Jesus's promise to return, the witness from the angels, John's closing words, Christ's message to his church, and the invitation and the warning (22:6-21) From dfdf0582bcb3affdf04439955c0d487b3d711c71 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SusanQuigley Date: Thu, 30 Nov 2023 19:54:58 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 8/9] Update 'rev/01/09.md' Corrected "who who" typo in alternate translation. --- rev/01/09.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/rev/01/09.md b/rev/01/09.md index c0c4b4be54..cbc6ec40d3 100644 --- a/rev/01/09.md +++ b/rev/01/09.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ These refer to the believers in the seven churches. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/f # I, John—your brother and the one who shares with you in the suffering and kingdom and patient endurance that are in Jesus—was -This can be stated as a separate sentence. Alternate translation: "I, John, am your brother who who shares with you in God's kingdom and also suffers and patiently endures trials along with you because we belong to Jesus. I was" +This can be stated as a separate sentence. Alternate translation: "I, John, am your brother who shares with you in God's kingdom and also suffers and patiently endures trials along with you because we belong to Jesus. I was" # because of the word of God From 6ffece9e6c10cd48ddde58edc3dacc53a6df478e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SusanQuigley Date: Thu, 30 Nov 2023 20:06:34 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 9/9] Update 'rev/01/14.md' Corrected "a flames" typo in alternate translation. --- rev/01/14.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/rev/01/14.md b/rev/01/14.md index 3e543231eb..733a25079f 100644 --- a/rev/01/14.md +++ b/rev/01/14.md @@ -8,5 +8,5 @@ This is the hair of a sheep or goat. It was known to be very white. # his eyes were like a flame of fire -His eyes are described as being full of light like fire flames. Alternate translation: "his eyes were glowing like a flames of fire" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-simile]]) +His eyes are described as being full of light like fire flames. Alternate translation: "his eyes were glowing like a flame of fire" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-simile]])