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-# However
+# However ... laid bare
 
 Although the Lord is being patient and wants people to repent, he will indeed return and bring judgment.
 
 # the day of the Lord will come as a thief
 
-Peter speaks of the day when God will judge everyone as if it were a thief who will unexpectedly and take people by surprise. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])
+Peter speaks of the day when God will judge everyone as if it were a thief who will come unexpectedly, and the people will be surprised when it happens. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])
 
 # The heavens will pass away