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 # Connecting Statement:
 
-Jesus begins to tell another parable about putting new wine in old wineskins as opposed to new wineskins. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parables]])
+Jesus begins to tell another parable. This one is about putting new wine into old wineskins rather than into new wineskins. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parables]])
 
 # new wine
 
-"grape juice." This refers to wine that has not fermented yet. If grapes are unknown in your area, use the general term for fruit.
+"grape juice." This refers to wine that has not fermented yet. If grapes are unknown in your area, use the general term for fruit juice.
 
 # old wineskins
 
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ This refers to wineskins that have been used many times.
 
 # wineskins
 
-These were bags made out of animal skins. They could also be called "wine bags" or "skin bags" .
+These were bags made out of animal skins. They could also be called "wine bags" or "skin bags."
 
 # the wine will burst the skins