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# When the king's order and decree were proclaimed

This can be stated in active form. AT: "After the king commanded that they search for some beautiful women" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

# proclaimed

"announced"

# many young women were brought

This can be stated in active form. AT: "they brought many young women" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

# They were put under Hegai's care

This can be stated in active form. AT: "Hegai began to take care of them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

# Esther also was taken into the king's palace and put under the care of Hegai, the overseer of the women

This can be stated in active form. AT: "Hegai, the overseer of the women, also began to take care of Esther when they brought her to the king's palace" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

# palace

See how you translated this in [Esther 1:5](../01/05.md).

# The young girl pleased him, and she found favor with him

These two phrases mean the same thing and emphasize how much she pleased him. AT: "The young girl greatly pleased him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]])

# The young girl

"Esther"

# translationWords

* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/other/king]]
* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/other/decree]]
* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/other/proclaim]]
* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/names/esther]]
* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/other/overseer]]
* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/favor]]
* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/other/servant]]
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`# When the king's order and decree were proclaimed`

			`This can be stated in active form. AT: "After the king commanded that they search for some beautiful women" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`

			`# proclaimed`
Initial commit of translationNotes 2016-02-23 02:42:46 +00:00
added v1 tn converted to an rc 2017-06-21 20:45:09 +00:00			`"announced"`
Initial commit of translationNotes 2016-02-23 02:42:46 +00:00
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`# many young women were brought`

			`This can be stated in active form. AT: "they brought many young women" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`

			`# They were put under Hegai's care`

			`This can be stated in active form. AT: "Hegai began to take care of them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`

			`# Esther also was taken into the king's palace and put under the care of Hegai, the overseer of the women`

			`This can be stated in active form. AT: "Hegai, the overseer of the women, also began to take care of Esther when they brought her to the king's palace" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`

			`# palace`

			`See how you translated this in [Esther 1:5](../01/05.md).`

			`# The young girl pleased him, and she found favor with him`

			`These two phrases mean the same thing and emphasize how much she pleased him. AT: "The young girl greatly pleased him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]])`

			`# The young girl`
Initial commit of translationNotes 2016-02-23 02:42:46 +00:00
added tw to notes 2017-06-24 00:15:21 +00:00			`"Esther"`

			`# translationWords`

			`* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/other/king]]`
			`* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/other/decree]]`
			`* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/other/proclaim]]`
Relinking after change of directories. 2017-08-30 21:09:31 +00:00			`* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/names/esther]]`
added tw to notes 2017-06-24 00:15:21 +00:00			`* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/other/overseer]]`
			`* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/favor]]`
			`* [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/other/servant]]`