From 6c1dbf8cdf034a88cb37ba619f134b6e96f429e4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Susan Quigley Date: Tue, 9 Oct 2018 20:43:07 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Removed reference to verse bridges in ULB and added examples --- translate/translate-versebridge/01.md | 27 +++++++++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/translate/translate-versebridge/01.md b/translate/translate-versebridge/01.md index 2d04295..194ca9f 100644 --- a/translate/translate-versebridge/01.md +++ b/translate/translate-versebridge/01.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ ### Description -In rare cases, you will see in the Unlocked Literal Bible (ULB) or the Unlocked Dynamic Bible (UDB) that two or more verse numbers are combined, such as 17-18. This is called a verse bridge. This means that the information in the verses was rearranged so that the story or message could be more easily understood. +In rare cases, you will see in the Unlocked Dynamic Bible (UDB) that two or more verse numbers are combined, such as 17-18. This is called a verse bridge. This means that the information in the verses was rearranged so that the story or message could be more easily understood. >29These were the clans of the Horites: Lotan, Shobal, Zibeon, and Anah, 30Dishon, Ezer, Dishan. These were clans of the Horites, according to their clan lists in the land of Seir. (Genesis 36:29-30 ULB) @@ -12,24 +12,31 @@ In the ULB text, verses 29 and 30 are separate, and the information about the pe ### Examples from the Bible -Sometimes the ULB has separate verses while the UDB has a verse bridge. +Sometimes the ULB has separate verses while the UDB has a verse bridge. In the example below the information was rearranged in the UDB so that the information about Yahweh blessing the land appears first. ->4However, there should be no poor among you (for Yahweh will surely bless you in the land that he gives you as an inheritance to possess), 5if only you diligently listen to the voice of Yahweh your God, to keep all these commandments that I am commanding you today. (Deuteronomy 15:4-5 ULB) +>4However, there should be no poor among you (for Yahweh will surely bless you in the land that he gives you as an inheritance to possess), 5if only you diligently listen to the voice of Yahweh your God, to keep all these commandments that I am commanding you today. (Deuteronomy 15:4-5 ULB) + +>4-5Yahweh our God will bless you in the land that he is giving to you. If you obey Yahweh our God and obey all the commandments that I am giving to you today, there will not be any poor people among you. (Deuteronomy 15:4-5 UDB) + +In the example below, the information was rearranged in the UDB so that it shows the order in which the events happened. ->4-5Yahweh our God will bless you in the land that he is giving to you. If you obey Yahweh our God and obey all the commandments that I am giving to you today, there will not be any poor people among you. (Deuteronomy 15:4-5 UDB) +>1Then Joseph went in and told Pharaoh, "My father and my brothers, their flocks, their herds, and all that they own, have arrived from the land of Canaan. See, they are in the land of Goshen." +>2He took five of his brothers and introduced them to Pharaoh. (Genesis 47:1-2 ULB) -### Translation Strategies +>1-2Joseph chose five of his brothers to go with him to talk to the king. He introduced them to the king, and then he said, "My father and my brothers have come from Canaan land. They have brought all their sheep, goats, cattle, and everything else that they own, and they are living now in region of Goshen." (Genesis 47:1-2 UDB) + +### Translation Strategy Order the information in a way that will be clear to your readers. -1. If you put information from one verse before information from an earlier verse, put a hyphen between the two verse numbers. +1. If you put information from one verse before information from an earlier verse, put the first and last verse numbers at the beginning with a hyphen between them. See how to mark verses in the [translationStudio APP](http://help.door43.org/en/knowledgebase/13-translationstudio-android/docs/24-marking-verses-in-translationstudio). -### Examples of Translation Strategies Applied - -1. If information from one verse is put before information from an earlier verse, put the verse numbers before the first verse with a hyphen between them. +### Examples of Translation Strategy Applied +1. If you put information from one verse before information from an earlier verse, put the first and last verse numbers at the beginning with a hyphen between them. * **2you must select three cities for yourself in the middle of your land that Yahweh your God is giving you to possess. 3You must build a road and divide the borders of your land into three parts, the land that Yahweh your God is causing you to inherit, so that everyone who kills another person may flee there.** (Deuteronomy 19:2-3) * 2-3you must divide into three parts the land that he is giving to you. Then select a city in each part. You must make good roads in order that people can get to those cities easily. Someone who kills another person can escape to one of those cities to be safe. (Deuteronomy 19:2-3 UDB) - + * **40These were the names of the heads of clans from Esau's descendants, according to their clans and their regions, by their names: Timna, Alvah, Jetheth, 41 Oholibamah, Elah, Pinon, 42 Kenaz, Teman, Mibzar, 43 Magdiel, and Iram. These were the clan heads of Edom, according to their settlements in the land they possessed. This was Esau, the father of the Edomites.** (Genesis 36:40-43 ULB) + * 40-43Here is a list of all the people groups that were descendants of Esau: Timna, Alvah, Jetheth, Oholibamah, Elah, Pinon, Kenaz, Teman, Mibzar, Magdiel, and Iram. They all lived in the land of Edom. The land where each people group lived got the same name as the name of the people group. (Genesis 36:40-43 UDB) \ No newline at end of file