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@@ -51,11 +51,11 @@ As the one who swears will die,
 \q2 Favor does not belong to people of knowledge.
 \q1 Instead, time and chance affect them all.
 \q1
-\v 12 For no one knows his time to die,
-\q2 just like fish trapped in a net of death,
-\q2 or just like birds caught in a snare.
-\q1 Like animals, human beings are imprisoned in evil times
-\q2 that suddenly fall on them.
+\v 12 And furthermore, no one knows when his time will come,
+\q2 just as fish are caught in a deadly net,
+\q2 or birds are caught in a snare,
+\q1 the children of human beings are ensnared by evil times
+\q2 that suddenly fall upon them.
 
 \s5
 \v 13 I have also seen wisdom under the sun in a way that seemed great to me.