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 \c 28
 \p
 \q1
-\v 1 Woe to the proud garland of the drunkards of Ephraim, and to the fading flower of his glorious beauty,
-\q1 that is on the head of the lush valley of those who are overcome with wine!
+\v 1 Woe to the proud garland crown that is worn by each of the drunkards of Ephraim, and to the fading flower of its glorious beauty,
+\q1 the garland that is set on the head of the lush valley of those who are overcome with wine!
 \q1
-\v 2 Behold, the Lord has a mighty and strong one; as a hailstorm,
-\q1 a destroying storm, as a cloudburst of might and overwhelming,
-\q1 he will strike the earth with his hand.
+\v 2 Behold, the Lord sends one who is mighty and strong; like a storm of hail and a destructive windstorm,
+\q1 like a driving rain and overflowing waters;
+\q1 and he will throw down each garland crown to the ground.
 
 \s5
 \q1