diff --git a/20-PRO.usfm b/20-PRO.usfm index 4cc965ac..b2abf791 100644 --- a/20-PRO.usfm +++ b/20-PRO.usfm @@ -689,7 +689,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 32 The one who commits adultery lacks heart; +\v 32 The one who commits adultery lacks sense; \q the one who does it destroys himself. \q \v 33 Wounds and shame are what he deserves @@ -709,7 +709,7 @@ \v 1 My son, keep my words \q and store up my commands within yourself. \q -\v 2 Keep my commands and live +\v 2 Keep my commands and live, \q and keep my instruction as the apple of your eye. \q \v 3 Tie them on your fingers; @@ -721,7 +721,7 @@ \q and call understanding your kinsman, \q \v 5 in order to keep yourself from the adulterous woman, -\q from the immoral woman with her smooth words. +\q from the immoral woman who makes her words smooth. \s5 \q @@ -745,7 +745,7 @@ \v 10 There a woman met him, \q dressed like a prostitute, with a false heart. \q -\v 11 She was loud and wayward; +\v 11 She was loud and rebellious; \q her feet did not stay at home. \q \v 12 Now in the streets, then in the marketplace, @@ -757,9 +757,9 @@ \q with a strong face she said to him, \q \v 14 "I made my peace offering today, -\q I paid my vows, +\q I fulfilled my vows, \q -\v 15 so came I out to meet you, +\v 15 so I came out to meet you, \q to eagerly seek your face, and I have found you. \s5 @@ -779,10 +779,10 @@ \q he has gone on a long journey. \q \v 20 He took a bag of money with him; -\q he will return on the day of the full moon." +\q he will come home on the day of the full moon." \q -\v 21 With much talk she turned him; -\q with her smooth lips she misled him. +\v 21 With her great persuasiveness she turned him; +\q with her smooth lips she compelled him. \s5 \q @@ -805,7 +805,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 26 She has caused many people to fall down pierced; -\q her dead victims are very many. +\q those she has slain are numerous. \q \v 27 Her house is on the paths to Sheol; \q they go down to the dark bedrooms of death.