Tom Warren
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power and hand
2016-08-18 11:34:07 -04:00
Tom Warren
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clarity
2016-08-18 11:22:20 -04:00
82201ba635
Deu 1:13 ULB - "tribe by tribe"
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and men of good repute, tribe by tribe,
2016-08-18 11:12:30 -04:00
dd22ca371b
Jdg 7:5 ULB - "must" to "may"
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No razor must come onto his head,
2016-08-18 11:00:29 -04:00
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Jdg 8:8 ULB - fixed RQ
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The original missed the negativity in the question.
We do not know why we should give bread to your army.
2016-08-18 10:52:28 -04:00
Henry Whitney
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Exo 19:9
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Change to future.
2016-08-18 10:12:47 -04:00
Tom Warren
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Hand was lifted up
2016-08-18 10:10:00 -04:00
642c7f78d2
Gen 29:32 ULB - changed "for" to "surely"
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for now my husband will love me.
2016-08-18 10:04:19 -04:00
Tom Warren
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the added
2016-08-18 09:56:04 -04:00
975bdd92bf
Gen 29:30 ULB - Reversed "married/slept with"
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UDB was more literal
2016-08-18 09:54:41 -04:00
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Gen 9:21 ULB - made emphatic
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\v 21 Then Jacob said to Laban, "Give me my wife, for my days have been completed—so that I may marry her."
2016-08-18 09:44:02 -04:00
eca738a0d8
Gen 29:15 ULB - made easier to read
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"Because you are my relative, should you therefore serve me for nothing? Tell me, what will your wages be?"
2016-08-18 09:37:12 -04:00
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Gen 27:43 ULB - readability
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\v 44 Stay with him there for a few days,
2016-08-18 09:31:07 -04:00
Tom Warren
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Keeping ideas together
2016-08-18 08:49:43 -04:00
Tom Warren
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3rd person to 1st person set off with em-dash
2016-08-18 08:47:14 -04:00
Tom Warren
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preserving the figure "thigh"
2016-08-18 08:35:03 -04:00
aad7cbc2d4
V20 typo "headscarves"
2016-08-18 10:42:41 +02:00
f2d5f41b9d
Update 17.usfm
2016-08-17 17:22:48 -05:00
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Update 17.usfm
2016-08-17 17:06:02 -05:00
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Gen 27:34-35 ULB - minor text changes
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\v 34 When Esau heard the words of his father, he cried with very great and bitter crying, and said to his father, "Bless me, me also, my father."
\v 35 Isaac said, "Your brother came in here deceitfully and has taken away your blessing."
2016-08-17 17:07:15 -04:00
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Update 03.usfm
2016-08-17 17:07:08 -04:00
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Gen 27:30 ULB - simplified sentence
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\v 30 As soon as Isaac had finished blessing Jacob, and Jacob had scarcely gone out from the presence of Isaac his father—it was then that Esau his brother came in from his hunting.
2016-08-17 17:01:30 -04:00
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Update 02.usfm
2016-08-17 16:43:07 -04:00
aaronfenlason
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Update 03.usfm
2016-08-17 15:07:19 -05:00
9eaba21acc
Psa 41:7 ULB - unspilt the quote
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"An evil disease," they say, "holds on tightly to him;
2016-08-17 15:42:27 -04:00
255b7710ac
Update 01.usfm
2016-08-17 14:16:22 -04:00
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Psa 40:5 ULB - awkward line break
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\q and your thoughts which are about us
\q cannot be numbered;
2016-08-17 14:11:27 -04:00
Tom Warren
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cleaning up
2016-08-17 14:09:57 -04:00
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Psa 40:1 ULB - removed "also"
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He also brought me up out of a horrible pit,
The "also" made it sound like separate events.
2016-08-17 13:38:06 -04:00
Henry Whitney
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Isa 1:4
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typo
2016-08-17 10:07:23 -04:00
Tom Warren
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deer to oaks
2016-08-17 10:03:40 -04:00
Tom Warren
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Ishmaelite not Israelite with Footnote
2016-08-17 09:34:36 -04:00
aaronfenlason
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Update 16.usfm
2016-08-16 16:26:02 -05:00
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Update 029.usfm
2016-08-16 16:21:23 -04:00
aaronfenlason
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Update 03.usfm
2016-08-16 14:46:14 -05:00
Henry Whitney
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Pro 19, 28, 29
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Standardizing בן.
2016-08-16 15:26:40 -04:00
aaronfenlason
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"Attack" in vv. 1, 2, 4
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The language of "going up" when referring to battle is everywhere else in the book rendered as "attack" or something similar. This brings these verses into conformity with the rest of the book. See also 20:18, which is parallel to 1:1-2.
2016-08-16 14:03:30 -05:00
Henry Whitney
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Pro 10, 13, 19
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Standardizing בן.
2016-08-16 15:02:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney
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Pro 3, 8, 15
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Standardized rendering of בני אדם.
2016-08-16 14:40:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
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Pro 8:5
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AWOL comma recaptured.
2016-08-16 12:39:21 -04:00
Henry Whitney
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Hos 9:8
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A snare for birds is more properly a "bird snare" than a "bird’s
snare." There’s probably a bird somewhere that builds snares, but it’s
much more common for the snare to be built to catch birds.
2016-08-16 11:42:38 -04:00
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Update 16.usfm
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16:32
added a missing "is"
2016-08-16 20:40:21 +05:30
aaronfenlason
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Changed "I can do nothing" in v. 16
2016-08-16 10:01:18 -05:00
Henry Whitney
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Hos 8:5
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De-UDBized.
2016-08-16 09:49:24 -04:00
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Psa 27:5 ULB - booth
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\v 5 For in the day of trouble he will shelter me in his booth;
\q in the cover of his tent he will hide me.
2016-08-16 09:32:43 -04:00
Henry Whitney
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Deut 20:20
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"Bulwarks" are defensive - what is to be built here is offensive.
"Siege works" seems to be a common enough rendering that plagiarism
should not be an issue.
2016-08-15 18:56:12 -04:00
Henry Whitney
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Deu 2:22
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even better
2016-08-15 18:47:12 -04:00
Henry Whitney
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Deu 2:22
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Awkward rephrased.
2016-08-15 18:45:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney
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Eco 16:29
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De-UDB’d text.
2016-08-15 18:31:08 -04:00
Henry Whitney
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Lev 23:41
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"Command" to "statute"
2016-08-15 18:14:22 -04:00
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