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@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ In verses 25-27 Noah pronounced a curse on Ham's son and blessings on Ham's brot
 
 Alternate phrases in these verses are indented to show that this is poetry. If you can, format these verses as they are formatted here to show your readers that this is poetry.
 
-# awoke from his drunkenness
+# awoke from his wine
 
-"became sober"
+He awoke after drinking wine and becoming drunk. He "became sober."
 
 # his youngest son