From c6b86f91e36d079d3412fa8eb19269dd0330c577 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2018 00:18:59 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 1/9] Fixed syntax. --- 2co/04/06.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/2co/04/06.md b/2co/04/06.md index 2d127c4521..5da45dda10 100644 --- a/2co/04/06.md +++ b/2co/04/06.md @@ -16,5 +16,5 @@ Here the word "hearts" refers to the mind and thoughts. Alternate translation: " # the glory of God in the presence of Jesus Christ -"the glory of God in the face of Jesus Christ." Just as God's glory shone upon Moses' face (See: [2 Corinthians 3:7](../03/07.md)), it also shines upon Jesus face. This means that when Paul preaches the gospel, people are able to see and understand the message about God's glory. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +"the glory of God in the face of Jesus Christ." Just as God's glory shone upon Moses' face ([2 Corinthians 3:7](../03/07.md)), it also shines upon Jesus face. This means that when Paul preaches the gospel, people are able to see and understand the message about God's glory. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) From e3655563407c76dc439af798c4c8581879438231 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2018 00:19:36 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 2/9] Fixed syntax. --- 2co/04/04.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/2co/04/04.md b/2co/04/04.md index bf710b13e9..3ec453a7bd 100644 --- a/2co/04/04.md +++ b/2co/04/04.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Paul speaks of their minds as if they had eyes, and their inability to understan # they are not able to see the light of the gospel of the glory of Christ -As the Israelites could not see God's glory that shined on Moses' face because he covered it with a veil (See: [2 Corinthians 3:13](../03/13.md)), unbelievers are not able to see Christ's glory that shines in the gospel. This means that they are unable to understand "the gospel of the glory of Christ" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +As the Israelites could not see God's glory that shined on Moses' face because he covered it with a veil ([2 Corinthians 3:13](../03/13.md)), unbelievers are not able to see Christ's glory that shines in the gospel. This means that they are unable to understand "the gospel of the glory of Christ" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # the light of the gospel From 7eda68799ad7f96dd1253c63786ee8cecb1c3468 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2018 00:20:11 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 3/9] Fixed syntax. --- mat/11/intro.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/mat/11/intro.md b/mat/11/intro.md index b9ce6b1a6f..e06236765f 100644 --- a/mat/11/intro.md +++ b/mat/11/intro.md @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Some scholars believe that [Matthew 11:20](../../mat/11/20.md) begins a new stag ##### Hidden revelation ##### -After [Matthew 11:20](../../mat/11/20.md), Jesus begins to reveal information about himself and about the plans of God the Father, while hiding this information from those who reject him. (See: [Matthew 11:25](../../mat/11/25.md)) +After [Matthew 11:20](../../mat/11/20.md), Jesus begins to reveal information about himself and about the plans of God the Father, while hiding this information from those who reject him ([Matthew 11:25](../../mat/11/25.md)). #### Other possible translation difficulties in this chapter #### From 5883977cd57b6236e46e7dbc8e48e1a71d7e388d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2018 00:20:29 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 4/9] Fixed syntax. --- mat/28/01.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/mat/28/01.md b/mat/28/01.md index 632056416b..023d6528c8 100644 --- a/mat/28/01.md +++ b/mat/28/01.md @@ -12,5 +12,5 @@ This word is used here to mark a break in the main story line. Here Matthew star # the other Mary -"the other woman named Mary." This is Mary the mother of James and Joseph. (See: [Matthew 27:56](../27/56.md)) +"the other woman named Mary." This is Mary the mother of James and Joseph ([Matthew 27:56](../27/56.md)). From 4456747ca94ccb729b40ba71d46ac66f41dca678 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2018 00:24:54 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 5/9] Fixed syntax. --- mat/25/14.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/mat/25/14.md b/mat/25/14.md index 5cbf574384..5c6e77c59b 100644 --- a/mat/25/14.md +++ b/mat/25/14.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Jesus tells a parable about faithful and unfaithful servants to illustrate that # it is like -"the kingdom of heaven is like" (See: [Matthew 13:24](../13/24.md)) +The word "it" here refers to the kingdom of heaven ([Matthew 13:24](../13/24.md)). # was about to go From e01c2fa536bdae8ee3dcc42ec759e5d0da7a4511 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2018 00:26:10 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 6/9] Fixed syntax. --- amo/front/intro.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/amo/front/intro.md b/amo/front/intro.md index 38925741fe..b8f1e74c6f 100644 --- a/amo/front/intro.md +++ b/amo/front/intro.md @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ The traditional title of this book is "The Book of Amos" or just "Amos." Transla #### Who wrote the Book of Amos? #### -The prophet Amos probably wrote this book. He lived in the southern kingdom of Judah. Amos came from a poor family. They grew sycamore trees (See: 7:14, 15) and were shepherds (See: [Amos 1:1](../../amo/01/01.md)). Though Amos was not trained as a prophet, he knew and understood the law of Moses. Also, Amos skillfully used expressive and meaningful words. +The prophet Amos probably wrote this book. He lived in the southern kingdom of Judah. Amos came from a poor family. They grew sycamore trees (7:14, 15) and were shepherds ([Amos 1:1](../../amo/01/01.md)). Though Amos was not trained as a prophet, he knew and understood the law of Moses. Also, Amos skillfully used expressive and meaningful words. ## Part 2: Important Religious and Cultural Concepts ## From d3a974b88da594dbe4a670d2f9ccea4ec863608b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2018 00:26:25 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 7/9] Fixed syntax. --- jer/37/12.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jer/37/12.md b/jer/37/12.md index e6ccfcb2dd..8e79a505aa 100644 --- a/jer/37/12.md +++ b/jer/37/12.md @@ -4,5 +4,5 @@ # among his people -"among his relatives." Jeremiah was from the town of Anathoth in the land of Benjamin. (See: [Jeremiah 1:1](../01/01.md)) +"among his relatives." Jeremiah was from the town of Anathoth in the land of Benjamin ([Jeremiah 1:1](../01/01.md)). From 952bc67d0569c0055dec553cd9e90a8360e5a694 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2018 00:27:15 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 8/9] Fixed syntax. --- neh/02/intro.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/neh/02/intro.md b/neh/02/intro.md index eaf2c925d3..6997859d93 100644 --- a/neh/02/intro.md +++ b/neh/02/intro.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ #### Structure and formatting #### -This chapter begins the account of the construction of the wall. Many scholars believe these chapters teach valuable lessons on leadership. (See: [Nehemiah 2-6](./01.md)) +This chapter begins the account of the construction of the wall. Many scholars believe these chapters teach valuable lessons on leadership ([Nehemiah 2-6](./01.md)). ##### Special concepts in this chapter ##### From 34dadd3529d29f8e56c3c013999f90c3552361a6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2018 00:27:41 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 9/9] Fixed syntax. --- neh/07/64.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/neh/07/64.md b/neh/07/64.md index f5a319b92e..80b2af488e 100644 --- a/neh/07/64.md +++ b/neh/07/64.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ # These sought -"These" refers to the descendants of Hobaiah, Hakkoz and Barzillai. (See: [Nehemiah 7:63](../07/63.md)) +"These" refers to the descendants of Hobaiah, Hakkoz and Barzillai ([Nehemiah 7:63](../07/63.md)). # but they could not be found