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act/01/04.md

@@ -10,11 +10,7 @@ This event happened during the 40 days that Jesus appeared to his followers afte
 
 "When Jesus was meeting together with his apostles"
 
-# the promise of the Father
+# the promise of the Father, about which, he said
 
-This is a reference to the Holy Spirit. Alternate translation: "the Holy Spirit, whom the Father promised to send" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
-
-# about which he said
-
-If you translated the previous phrase to include the words "Holy Spirit," you can change the word "which" to "whom." Alternate translation: "about whom Jesus said"
+This is a reference to the Holy Spirit. Alternate translation: "the Holy Spirit, whom the Father promised to send, about whom Jesus said" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 

act/07/12.md

@@ -4,4 +4,4 @@ Grain was the most common food at that time.
 
 # our fathers
 
-Here this phrase refers to Jabob's sons, Joseph's older brothers.
+Here this phrase refers to Joseph's older brothers, who were Jacob's sons.

act/07/15.md

@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@ Make sure it does not sound as though he died as soon as he arrived in Egypt. Al
 
 # he and our fathers
 
-"Jacob and his sons who became our ancestors"
+"Jacob and his sons, who became our ancestors"
 

jhn/15/27.md

@@ -2,6 +2,9 @@
 
 Here "testify" means to tell others about Jesus. Alternate translation: "You also must tell everyone what you know about me" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
+# You also must
+Some English versions of the Bible translate "must" as "will." Alternate translation: "You also will"
+
 # the beginning
 
 Here the "beginning" is a metonym that means the first days of Jesus' ministry. Alternate translation: "from the very first days when I began teaching the people and doing miracles" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])