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-# But he went
+# But he went out
 
 The word "he" refers to the man Jesus healed.
 
-# tell everyone ... spread the word
+# began to spread the news widely
 
-These two phrases share similar meanings and are used together to emphasize that the man told a lot of people. "Word" here is a metonym for "message." AT: "tell everyone ... spread the message" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+Here "spread the news widely" is a metaphor for telling people in many places about what had happened. AT: "began to tell people in many places about what Jesus had done" (See: and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
-# everyone
+# so much that
 
-The word "everyone" is an exaggeration to emphasize how very many people he told. AT: "many people he met" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hyperbole]])
+The man spread the news so much that
 
-# Jesus could no longer freely enter into any town
+# that Jesus could no longer enter a town openly
 
-It is implied that the large crowds prevented Jesus from being able to enter the towns because the crowds made it difficult for him to walk around there. AT: "the crowds prevented Jesus from moving freely in towns" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
+This was the result of the man spreading the news so much. Here "openly" is a metaphor for "publicly." Jesus could not enter the towns because many people would crowd around him. AT: "that Jesus could no longer enter a town publicly" or "that Jesus could no longer enter the towns in a way that many people would see him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
-# solitary places
+# remote places
 
 "lonely places" or "places where no one lived"