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 # The sky vanished like a scroll that was being rolled up
 
-The sky was normally thought of as being strong like a sheet of metal, but now it was weak like a sheet of paper and easily torn and rolled up. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])
+The sky was normally thought of as being as strong as a sheet of metal, but now it had become as weak as a sheet of paper and was easily torn and rolled up. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])