PDF Titus and Philemon

1ti/01/10.md

@@ -12,5 +12,5 @@ This refers to anyone who sleeps with someone to whom they are not married.
 
 # whatever else is opposed to healthy teaching
 
-The word "healthy" is a dead metaphor for true, trustworthy, and morally good. Alternate translation: "whatever other things people do that we teach is wrong" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphordead]])
+The word "healthy" here is a dead metaphor for true, trustworthy, and morally good. Alternate translation: "whatever other things people do that we teach is wrong" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphordead]])
 

1ti/06/03.md

@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 
 # healthy words
 
-The word "healthy" is a dead metaphor for true, trustworthy, and morally good. See how you translated the word "healthy" in [1 Timothy 1:10](../01/10.md). Alternate translation: "trustworthy words" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphordead]])
+The word "healthy" here is a dead metaphor for true, trustworthy, and morally good. See how you translated the word "healthy" in [1 Timothy 1:10](../01/10.md). Alternate translation: "trustworthy words" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphordead]])
 

2ti/01/13.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
 # healthy words
 
-The word "healthy" is a dead metaphor for true, trustworthy, and morally good. Alternate translation: "trustworthy words" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphordead]])
+The word "healthy" here is a dead metaphor for true, trustworthy, and morally good. Alternate translation: "trustworthy words" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphordead]])
 
 # with the faith and love that are in Christ Jesus
 

phm/01/22.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
 "make a room in your house ready for me." Paul is addressing Philemon here, so the word "prepare" is singular. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-you]])
 
-# for I hope that through your prayers I will be given back to you
+# for I hope that through your prayers I will be restored to you
 
 Paul is confident that he will return to Philemon and the other Christians there. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "for I confidently expect that God will answer your prayers and send me back to you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]])
 

tit/01/09.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 Paul speaks of devotion to the Christian faith as if it were grasping the faith with one's hands. Alternate translation: "be devoted to" or "know well" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
 
-# good teaching
+# healthy teaching
 
-He must teach what is true about God and other spiritual matters.
+The word "healthy" here is a dead metaphor for true, trustworthy, and morally good. Alternate translation: "trustworthy teaching" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphordead]])
 

tit/01/11.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
 These are things that are not proper to teach regarding Christ and the Law because they are not true.
 
-# for shameful profit
+# for disgraceful profit
 
 This refers to profit that people make by doing things that are not honorable.
 

tit/01/13.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 "You must use strong language that the Cretans will understand when you correct them"
 
-# so that they may be sound in the faith
+# so that they may be healthy in the faith
 
-"so they will have a healthy faith" or "so their faith may be true"
+The word "healthy" here is a dead metaphor for true, trustworthy, and morally good. Alternate translation: "so that they may believe what is true and do what is morally good" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphordead]])
 

tit/02/01.md

@@ -6,7 +6,8 @@ Paul continues giving Titus reasons to preach God's word, and explains how the o
 
 Paul implies what is in contrast. Alternate translation: "But you, Titus, in contrast with the false teachers, be sure to say those things that fit" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]])
 
-# with faithful instruction
+# healthy instruction
+
+The word "healthy" here is a dead metaphor for true, trustworthy, and morally good. See how you translated "healthy" in [Titus 1:10](../01/10.md). Alternate translation: "trustworthy instruction" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphordead]])
 
-"with sound doctrine" or "with correct teachings"
 

tit/02/02.md

@@ -2,11 +2,11 @@
 
 "to be sober-minded" or "to be self-controlled"
 
-# temperate, dignified, sensible, sound
+# temperate, dignified, sensible, healthy
 
-"temperate and dignified, to control their desires, and to be sound"
+"temperate and dignified, to control their desires, and to be healthy"
 
-# sound in faith, in love, and in perseverance
+# healthy in faith, in love, and in perseverance
 
-Here the word "sound" means to be firm and unwavering. The abstract nouns "faith," "love," and "perseverance" can be stated as verbs. Alternate translation: "and they must firmly believe the true teachings about God, truly love others, and continually serve God even when things are difficult" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns]])
+The word "healthy" here is a dead metaphor that means to be firm and unwavering. The abstract nouns "faith," "love," and "perseverance" can be stated as verbs. Alternate translation: "and they must firmly believe the true teachings about God, truly love others, and continually serve God even when things are difficult" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns]])
 

tit/02/05.md

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# so that God's word may not be reproached
+# so that God's word may not be spoken of as evil
 
 "Word" here is a metonym for "message," which in turn is a metonym for God himself. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "so that no one insults God's word" or "so that no one insults God by saying bad things about his message" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
 

tit/02/08.md

@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
-# a correct message that is above criticism
+# a healthy message that is above criticism
 
-"a correct message that no one can criticize"
+"a healthy message that no one can criticize"
+
+# healthy message
+
+The word "healthy" here is a dead metaphor for true, trustworthy, and morally good. See how you translated "healthy" in [Titus 1:9](../01/09.md). Alternate translation: "trustworthy words" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphordead]])